Have someone proofread it before posting, the story seems promising buh for a person well versed in the English language, poor grammar is a huge turn off
It’s one thing to help someone and it’s another thing to help someone even tho they’ve ignored your good intentions and also attacked you, you’re projecting the MC as someone who is weak in front of women
[The User coats their fingertips in Darkness energy before slamming them into the ground, sending pitch-black spikes with glowing red tips to burst forward in a straight line.]