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RinsurettoLv53yr
2021-06-06 15:17

The story so far has been very engaging and the premise of the protagonist, Yun Lintian that "supposedly" reincarnates without cheat powers is very interesting for an eastern fantasy novel. The author managed to keep us enthralled by dropping hints about the protagonist's mysterious past and hopefully, future "cheat powers" which the protagonist so comically complains about not having so often. The protagonist, being an avid Xianxia reader himself has entertained us with modern jokes combined with "fourth wall breaking" within his inner monologues, has never failed to leave me with a chuckle. His well-written character development gives you an insight into how really each person’s relationship to him is, to a point where you may even feel connected and share feelings with them. One can ignore its minor grammatical quirks, as this novel has impressed me with how well written it is as an original novel, and with its world-building and attention to detail, it definitely made me feel as though i was reading a translated Chinese novel. Its in-depth plot, pacing, interesting characters, and especially the very likable and smart protagonist leaves me with an impression of: "This is a quality novel". This is a great read overall and I am looking forward to the unveiling of its mysteries, the protagonist’s future development and his connection with the other characters. This is a Xianxia novel with abundant potential. Keep up the great work author!

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CloudBeneathMoonAuthor

Thank you for your great review! I don't know what to say at this moment, but so far, this is definitely one of the most well-written review I've ever seen. Again, thank you for your support.

21manLv15

is this a harem

CloudBeneathMoon:Thank you for your great review! I don't know what to say at this moment, but so far, this is definitely one of the most well-written review I've ever seen. Again, thank you for your support.
CloudBeneathMoonAuthor

To answer your question, I would say it can be yes and no. I haven't replied to this in the first place because I would love readers to read my novel and figure it out by themselves. I can only say that the romance in this book is not simple as where jade beauties fall for the protagonist for no reason. Thank you.

21man:is this a harem
snoobe18Lv4

what about revenge tengge on the one who hurt his foster mother?

CloudBeneathMoon:To answer your question, I would say it can be yes and no. I haven't replied to this in the first place because I would love readers to read my novel and figure it out by themselves. I can only say that the romance in this book is not simple as where jade beauties fall for the protagonist for no reason. Thank you.
DemonpigLv4

Poor girls if this is not harem :(

CloudBeneathMoon:To answer your question, I would say it can be yes and no. I haven't replied to this in the first place because I would love readers to read my novel and figure it out by themselves. I can only say that the romance in this book is not simple as where jade beauties fall for the protagonist for no reason. Thank you.
SHADOWBLADELv13

R18?

CloudBeneathMoon:To answer your question, I would say it can be yes and no. I haven't replied to this in the first place because I would love readers to read my novel and figure it out by themselves. I can only say that the romance in this book is not simple as where jade beauties fall for the protagonist for no reason. Thank you.
Rascal_7777Lv11

Is there a lot of girls who are attracted to the mc?

Demonpig:Poor girls if this is not harem :(
its_LLv3

you would love people to read and all is good but author you should understand that people who hate harems like me won't waste their time reading a novel (even if it is good) only later to know that it is harem and drop the novel later on that's why you should atleast clear if it's harem or not

CloudBeneathMoon:To answer your question, I would say it can be yes and no. I haven't replied to this in the first place because I would love readers to read my novel and figure it out by themselves. I can only say that the romance in this book is not simple as where jade beauties fall for the protagonist for no reason. Thank you.
SadBrokenBarrelLv11

will there be some ice sect or something that kidnap fml?

CloudBeneathMoon:To answer your question, I would say it can be yes and no. I haven't replied to this in the first place because I would love readers to read my novel and figure it out by themselves. I can only say that the romance in this book is not simple as where jade beauties fall for the protagonist for no reason. Thank you.
CloudBeneathMoonAuthor

No.

SadBrokenBarrel:will there be some ice sect or something that kidnap fml?
SadBrokenBarrelLv11

all right cool iim jumping in then. Im so sick of reading cultivation story and the fml is gone for like a good two or three arc...

CloudBeneathMoon:No.
Kirisuna1Lv4

if it becomes harem then ... just gonna drop it

CloudBeneathMoon:To answer your question, I would say it can be yes and no. I haven't replied to this in the first place because I would love readers to read my novel and figure it out by themselves. I can only say that the romance in this book is not simple as where jade beauties fall for the protagonist for no reason. Thank you.
AeternitasLv5

It's much easier and less frustrating to consider it a harem and move on since the author doesn't want to give a straight answer.

Kirisuna1:if it becomes harem then ... just gonna drop it
Senpai_GodLv4

when does the mc get stronger cultivation and more talent? i like op mcs and it said the mc was op in the description

AzmuthLv4

I don't care if it's a Harem or not , I like the story . You can have my power stone guru , you have taken me out of River of Boredom Thanks a lot .

CloudBeneathMoon:To answer your question, I would say it can be yes and no. I haven't replied to this in the first place because I would love readers to read my novel and figure it out by themselves. I can only say that the romance in this book is not simple as where jade beauties fall for the protagonist for no reason. Thank you.
CrycksLv14

you have good review but because of your synopsis i will skip this one. 1- if not because my finger was to short i would have left instantly when reading cliché 2- he have no cheat but warning mc is overpowered? 3- personal opinion, but i got repulsed by reading about the full girl sect.

CloudBeneathMoon:Thank you for your great review! I don't know what to say at this moment, but so far, this is definitely one of the most well-written review I've ever seen. Again, thank you for your support.
PotatownedLv14

People like me who despise harems don't want to waste time reading something only to later see that it's a harem and have to drop it. I'm just assuming it is at this point so I don't waste time.

CloudBeneathMoon:To answer your question, I would say it can be yes and no. I haven't replied to this in the first place because I would love readers to read my novel and figure it out by themselves. I can only say that the romance in this book is not simple as where jade beauties fall for the protagonist for no reason. Thank you.
cIoudy_thoughtsLv14

ATG 😭😭

SadBrokenBarrel:all right cool iim jumping in then. Im so sick of reading cultivation story and the fml is gone for like a good two or three arc...
A_Cultured_ManLv14

I like harem if it is well written and the number is within 5 as max

GifflarGodLv14

I feel u.. seems like a great novel but not gonna read it until it's finished and then i can ask someone if it's harem. There is no "good" harem. all harem novels are trash novels.

Potatowned:People like me who despise harems don't want to waste time reading something only to later see that it's a harem and have to drop it. I'm just assuming it is at this point so I don't waste time.
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