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Shunsuke_UchihaLv41yr
2023-12-30 13:51

this is a pretty well written story, the cheats, the world background, characters and all but sadly the MC is too much of a goody two-shoes busybody who could get OP fast but instead has to be all Mr righteous. as at chapter 700, there are multiple chicks that want the MC but he's like i can't protect them so not yet and yet he has a secret realm all to himself. it's a really nice story though but i don't like the righteousness. I mean, prior to his 'reincarnation' he was a contracted killer who supposedly killed for good. he's understandably overprotective but his righteousness is too much for me. Other than our conflicting ideologies, everyone should read this

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BUDALv1

hello! Since you read the story, could you answer some questions for me? are as follows: How is the issue of romance in the work? Is he spending more time with the girls? Did he marry them? And do you have any Discord links?

Amber_buttonLv2

he just visits them from tym to tym.. they cant keep up with the mc so they just become a vase.. honestly its very frustating especially his persobality of being mr. righteous its still bearable when he is in azure world but when he goes to divine realm he just spare almost all the god emperor that betray his master

BUDA:hello! Since you read the story, could you answer some questions for me? are as follows: How is the issue of romance in the work? Is he spending more time with the girls? Did he marry them? And do you have any Discord links?
CHAOS_FOOLISHLv12

Master... What master?

Amber_button:he just visits them from tym to tym.. they cant keep up with the mc so they just become a vase.. honestly its very frustating especially his persobality of being mr. righteous its still bearable when he is in azure world but when he goes to divine realm he just spare almost all the god emperor that betray his master
DaoistArboreLv14

It’s always funny to read the reviews of people saying they don’t like “goody two shoes” protagonists. In reality, it’s a self report saying that you’re lazy and don’t care about other people unless you can milk them for benefits. Funny enough, if you were transmigrated, you’d end up being the kind of MC that never amounts to anything because you’d get backstabbed for just being like a young master

Shunsuke_UchihaLv4

naah bro, I agree transmigration is a big change but does it necessarily warrant a big change in personality to match. I think that one's personality remains the same only with some additional traits since one may let loose on some of their inhibitions

DaoistArbore:It’s always funny to read the reviews of people saying they don’t like “goody two shoes” protagonists. In reality, it’s a self report saying that you’re lazy and don’t care about other people unless you can milk them for benefits. Funny enough, if you were transmigrated, you’d end up being the kind of MC that never amounts to anything because you’d get backstabbed for just being like a young master
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