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2021-06-23 16:10

After reading until chapter 31, the story so far is good. It has a unique flavor and a unique interaction between the characters. MC of this novel is mature and thinking according to the information he had at that moment, which makes me doubt his identity when he was on Earth. I'm hoping to know more about his past. At the same time, he can be funny by using his knowledge of the novels he had read before to insert into the situation he was in. At this point alone, I would give it 10/10. The other side characters are all great. They have their own personalities, more realistic compared to other novels that I had read before. I can't get enough of Yun Qianxue's overprotectiveness and Yun Huanxin's Gilgamesh-esque ability. Not to mention the mysterious assassin-like Yun Meilan, she is by far, attracting me the most because I like the assassin-type character. The world-building is rich. It looks simple but it filled with mysterious and the author did a great job by revealing it bit by bit. The narration in this novel is great. Sometimes, it makes me thought I am reading a translated novel instead of an original novel. There is surely a grammar quirk but is not that annoying. I am not a native English speaker and I find the grammar in this novel is good without disturbing my reading experience. Lastly, I wish the author could release more per day because I can't get enough of it.

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Is harem?

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Did you continue reading after 31 chapters?

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After 650+ chapters I'm back to give another review. ~Mc isn't stupid, he doesn't chase skirts like most of the Cultivation novel MC's. He is hardworking, shameless, shows kindness and doesn't show mercy to his enemies. ~Side characters who's their own problems and life. They are not there to only shine the MC but they are flesh out characters who has their own uniqueness. Character development is really good. ~World building is also a strong point of the novel. There are another world's ready to be explored, there are multiple continents with their own uniqueness. And you can expect much more in the future. ~ Enemies are strong, really strong with great backgrounds and has massive armies. There are more than couple of enemies that MC has to face before continuing his journey. One more powerful than the other. ~Battle scenes are really good. It takes his intelligence as well his strength to come out on the positive side of the battles. ~English is the the best but it's not the worst either with few grammatical errors. ~Romance has potential. Trust me on this but i see that author knows his stuff and you can expect a gradual building relationship between characters. ~It is a well paced story neither slow nor fast. ~MC has his plot armor but that will not make him OP, though it will give him an immense potential on his journey to the top.He isn't seeking strength for some b*lls**t reasons but to save his life and the lives of his subordinates. ~MC is not omnipotent he will make mistakes, he has his own flaws. But let me remind you without flaws there will be a limited space for character growth. Overall a very good gem of a novel.If you've read this far that give it a try you'll surely love it.

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