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Aimi_Fuyutsuki
Aimi_FuyutsukiLv42yr
2022-03-19 02:12

Sigh...200-300 chapters in reading this book. Now, I understand the 5* ratings, I really do. Out of all of the books on the website this novel actually deserves the rating it gets. But for me personally, I´ve been on this website for around 2 years. I´ve read so many books that most of them seem the same to me. Sadly, this book is no exception. Because, if you really think about it, all of the popular books on this website all revolve around the premise of an OP MC, a system, basically just nothing unique. Now, the world building, world background and everything is great, but I just can´t enjoy how the story is written, which is the important part of my review. The few books I´ve enjoyed - Age of Adepts, Devil´s Cage, Versatile Mage, Cosmic Professional Gladiator, Soul of Negary All of these not only had an overpowered MC, but a well written story. Now, you might say ¨But this story has a really well written MC too!¨ But the thing is, in the books I listed, whether it was the author, the writing style, whatever - those caused the development of the story to be far better than this one. Now, I´m not saying the book is bad, I´m just a little tired of seeing the same thing over and over again. To new readers, this book would be a great read and even to some experienced readers this book would still be a great read. But it´s different for me. As always, take my review with a grain of salt. Everyone has their own opinions, me included. If you managed to read the whole thing, kudos to you :) Have a good day and thank you for reading.

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Daoist5tuZTe
Daoist5tuZTeLv12

you said more about yourself than the book LOL

Omnidoa
OmnidoaLv5

I agree that's the hard part of reading too much. often times the first time you get introduced to a general that will be the best one. Sadly it's not really possible to re gain that feeling for the same genre

Aimi_Fuyutsuki
Aimi_FuyutsukiLv4

then tell me why this novel is good

Daoist5tuZTe:you said more about yourself than the book LOL
Luke_Edewor
Luke_EdeworLv1

hey bro, can you recommend the best novels out there? thank you

Aimi_Fuyutsuki:then tell me why this novel is good
xpace
xpaceLv1

I want to agree with Daoist5tuZTe in how it says more about you than this novel. Isn't your issue the fact that this MC has a System and is overpowered? But if you have a problem with that, then why read this at all or have an expectation of really liking it? Did you miss the "System" tag and the "Overpowered" tag in the tags list? Feels unfair to give it 3 stars for that reason alone, especially as you agree it actually deserves 5 stars for those who like this sort of thing. That's like readers review bombing novels with a "harem" or an "LGBT+" tag simply because it contains such content... despite being warned with the novel having a tag for it.

Kevide
KevideLv1

thanks for the recoms onii chan

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Wylden_BondLv15

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Zelga
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I rarely write reviews, which already proves that a story worth writing one left a big impression (positive or negative). At this point I read 701 chapters and I don't regret a second of it. Writing quality: A comparrison to the Webnovel standard would just be wrong. In 700 chapters there are barely any gramatical or spelling errors. Updating Stability: 2 daily updates each with at least 2000 words and great quality. In the 2-3 Months since I caught up not a single update was missed. Bonus chapters are rare, which considering the already insane sceddule is not an issue. Character design: The characters are neither the most unique nor generic. What realy makes them great to me is their development and growth. Each main character gets enough spotlight and even sidecharacters are rarely forgotten. The development is rather slow without stagnating, making it natural and considering the slow pacing of the novel in general (not even 4 months after 700 chapters), this totaly makes sence. Another thing I like a lot is that the plotarmor is not too obvious/extreme, nor are the characters stupid for the sake of plot. Story development: As said before, the pacing is realy slow, which I personaly love. While MC becomes one of the strongest realy fast, the story manages to still be balanced and present good chalenges, without feeling forced. World background: A clear defined powersystem, a fantasticaly described world and a intriguing history, which gives room to theorize. All of that without logical errors. The system: Every living being has acces to the system, which is designed to help them, reach a better evolutionary stage. There are few elements to the system, which apear to be based on luck (i.e. loot orbs or skill scroles). Those are minor and not as luckdependent as they apear in the beginning. The community: I have yet to find another community as active and interactive as this one on webnovel, and by now I look foreward not only to the chapters, but the commentsection as well. Overall 6/5 easily the best webnovel I found so far and even my second Favorit book/novel/mange etc. in general.

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