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TheArcher7
TheArcher7Lv123yr
2021-08-31 06:46

The storytelling is very amateurish, there's some blatant fan service and casual sexism, but at least the MC is smart and the system mechanics are interesting. Reading up to chapter 36, I find the MC's rational decision making very refreshing. The game mechanic (where leveling up with soul energy sometimes rewards you with an item instead if there's excess) is creative in its own way. However the storytelling itself is amateurish. Small fights that we know the MC or another character will win are described instead of cut, allowing the plot to progress faster. There's also a lot of repetitive descriptions of characters that should also be cut. Tropes: Ice queen tsundere, a lot of hot blooded men, and OP dark lord MC himself. No arrogant young masters (yet). Also, Lilith could totally be cut out of the beginning. She's only there for comedic relief, fanservice, and to inform the MC of "things he would figure out eventually." Lastly, there is definitely some casual sexism, culture shocks, that people might not like.

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Void_Guardian
Void_GuardianLv11

Lilith is my religion leave her out of your review lol.

Ryuuto_Minagaru
Ryuuto_MinagaruLv11

It’s a story with a male lead, what’d you expect? The author not to describe how the love interests look?

Durgesh_Kumar_4012
Durgesh_Kumar_4012Lv12

Author should surely describe the female lead, just that there is no need to describe it every 2-3 chapters and fill almost 1/3 to 1/5 of the chapter with these descriptions.

Ryuuto_Minagaru:It’s a story with a male lead, what’d you expect? The author not to describe how the love interests look?
Vandenberg
VandenbergLv11

KEEP LILITH'S NAME OUTA YOUR F'IN MOUTH

Void_Guardian:Lilith is my religion leave her out of your review lol.
Adam_Dante
Adam_DanteLv1

*Slap

Vandenberg:KEEP LILITH'S NAME OUTA YOUR F'IN MOUTH
Transiunti
TransiuntiLv1

If it is chinese novel, you can guarantee 100% sexism and racist. do not surprise

asdf_asdf_1820
asdf_asdf_1820Lv1

"The story is very amateurish". This is Webnovel where most writers are amateurs

deeejmx
deeejmxLv14

Hence the word ”very”.

asdf_asdf_1820:"The story is very amateurish". This is Webnovel where most writers are amateurs
Kaishepard28
Kaishepard28Lv15

I like Lilith but her being around so much at the beginning was not needed. still reading 200ish chapter and hope no harem

julo_1962
julo_1962Lv1

so many simping for Lilith here lol

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Wylden_Bond
Wylden_BondLv15

Writing Quality: 5 stars for vast use of the English language, correct spelling, punctuation ect. Story Development: This author needs to have this turned into a manga and then have an anime adaptation too it so that I can preorder the digital copy for every season in advance. Plot detail you never expected from a novel. Only gets deeper and more in depth the more you read, won't take long for you to be lost in this story, and you definitely won't want to find your way out. Absolutely outstanding time reading this. Currently up to current date chapter at 740. This author has also mastered the use of Cliffhangers, why spell Cliffhangers with a capital C? Should be obvious once you read this, author makes you sit at the edge of your seat almost the entire time you read with nearly know breaks. You would think you would be exhausted by this but really your just saddened that there's not a few thousand more chapters and you have to wait for a new one to come out. Too Good. Character Design: Where to even begin. Depth to every character simply close to the MC, with mob characters occasionally feeling like they aren't just there to fill space. Which is outstanding for any modern day book as most seem to just pass over mobs as if there background characters that don't really exist. Author doesn't know when to quit and goes to great lengths to make even side characters seem personable. Being able to empathize or relate to a side character in a novel is just crazy cool. Updating Stability: Author knows what he is doing and has a direction that he wants to go. 14 chapters a week and he has been making it happen for months this man is a literature genius/part machine pumping out quality writing day in and day out like it's as easy as breathing. Chapters so good you wish you could pay to read more then 14 chapters a week. World background: If previous chapters haven't convinced you and you aren't already reading the novel already. I sincerely give my condolences and hope that your okay lol. For real this author is currently describing the terrain in certain parts of the book including giving a geographical idea of where the story takes place and at a certain point shows you that this will eventually travel from earth to different planets throughout the universe. I will not be surprised if he gets to the point where he is trying to give a detailed description of the multiverse he creates once the story goes further along. Overall Review: Author isn't Human, He is an AI of the highest order, programmed to make the highest quality novels we have seen. If you miss out, I'm sorry for your loss and hope that you find quite a few hundred dollar bills on the pavement over the course of your life. Cause I would personally give those up to read more of this. Good Luck Readers. Also you need a strong heart for this novel. Every cliff hanger is too good/painful and there's almost too many, but they're so good, I can't say there's to many of them.

Zelga
ZelgaLv15

I rarely write reviews, which already proves that a story worth writing one left a big impression (positive or negative). At this point I read 701 chapters and I don't regret a second of it. Writing quality: A comparrison to the Webnovel standard would just be wrong. In 700 chapters there are barely any gramatical or spelling errors. Updating Stability: 2 daily updates each with at least 2000 words and great quality. In the 2-3 Months since I caught up not a single update was missed. Bonus chapters are rare, which considering the already insane sceddule is not an issue. Character design: The characters are neither the most unique nor generic. What realy makes them great to me is their development and growth. Each main character gets enough spotlight and even sidecharacters are rarely forgotten. The development is rather slow without stagnating, making it natural and considering the slow pacing of the novel in general (not even 4 months after 700 chapters), this totaly makes sence. Another thing I like a lot is that the plotarmor is not too obvious/extreme, nor are the characters stupid for the sake of plot. Story development: As said before, the pacing is realy slow, which I personaly love. While MC becomes one of the strongest realy fast, the story manages to still be balanced and present good chalenges, without feeling forced. World background: A clear defined powersystem, a fantasticaly described world and a intriguing history, which gives room to theorize. All of that without logical errors. The system: Every living being has acces to the system, which is designed to help them, reach a better evolutionary stage. There are few elements to the system, which apear to be based on luck (i.e. loot orbs or skill scroles). Those are minor and not as luckdependent as they apear in the beginning. The community: I have yet to find another community as active and interactive as this one on webnovel, and by now I look foreward not only to the chapters, but the commentsection as well. Overall 6/5 easily the best webnovel I found so far and even my second Favorit book/novel/mange etc. in general.

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