This is the third review after 210 chapters that includes two volumes. Please read this so that you won't need to waste words to complain. First, Mike is not a hero, not a cold killer, not smart, and not even fearless to his death. He is an idiot that doesn't feel likes thinking through the circumstances. He is emotionally weak so character development is the major part of this book. As a writer, I apologize for not being consistent over some factors that are explained early in the story which over explains many things that are not necessary. You can freely skip those details in your mind. For writing this book, I am very satisfied with my story development and if you read it carefully, you can find hints of future events early in the story. As much as I spent time writing MC, I have tried to keep other main characters 3D. You can find it as you reach the second volume. Finally, the last thing that I want to tell you is something that speaks to the story tags. It's an action, adventure, adult, comedic, dramatic, story set in a world where adult stuff is very common.
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I’m Currently still at chapter 11 but i really need to ask, does the novel focus on virtual reality thing or on real world more?
It does focus on the real world but the virtual world is confusing. Because there are some factors left unexplained about the virtual world.
i am currently on ch- 200 . so far i like the story very much
novel ramrai xa hola ni hai author sahab😆
I like the way you are developing the characters. I was trying to join your discord but I get a notice of invalid invite.
if it's not very difficult to answer......can Author please tell me how much did you earn from writing the novel so far ?
of all the names out there you chose Mike Tyson.. its the first thing that threw me off from reading this.
hehehehehh
could you tell me, does scarlet,the mc first love, goin to join mc harem's or what?? does you use some old-school strategy, such as betrayal of one of his lovers or death one's of his lovers (she will not be live again) or many other dark ways or strategies, to make the mc more diligent for his cultivation to gain strength??
Does she die, cause i hate her soooo much. if she gets in the harem i going to lose it
Can u answer me this, does Scarlet get together with him cuase the way u have set up her character has made her the most hated character for me.
I'm sorry after I see the scene where Scarlet make mc real love become like someone who's doesn't have dignity, o lose it and doesn't read it anymore
Its fine, i tried reading more but it got boring and that part your talking about didnt help
So in the end i dropped it too 🤷♂️
alright, that's also 🆗
I really disappointed with the ending we miss a lot but it still great
why u always make alternate earth story' not complere different world
are all mc's wives virgins? important question
Dear author I have to say first NO ONE named MIKE TYSON is NORMAL. I believe the synopsis will need some adjustments now and secondly Thank You for this book
Did you know... Yin-Yang Harmony generally implies the MC is a hermaphrodite, by definition. Not a dual cultivator. Not some offshoot of gay or bi. Think the standard term is that they have a Yin-Yang body or constitution. Still, it just means they're born hermaphroditic. Same as a slug or snail.
