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Suoshi
SuoshiLv23yr
2021-05-27 16:49

Pretty good writing style. I have no major grammar or vocab errors to report. But the world background could do with a bit of shaping up. Other than that, not bad.

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Princezik14
Princezik14Lv14

are we reading the same novel ??

DraskelClan
DraskelClanLv15

really? the English in this isn't the worst I've seen, but it is pretty close to bad.

PumpkinKat
PumpkinKatLv1

English committed sepuku

Suoshi
SuoshiLv2

i wrote this review in the early days of the novel lol, i dunno how it's improved

DraskelClan:really? the English in this isn't the worst I've seen, but it is pretty close to bad.
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