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2021-12-29 13:27

This was so good till the end. In the span of like 50 chapters he goes fro this stable middle of the pack strength to this godly being ruling over the world only to bet met with he couldn’t accomplish his dreams because he saw the future and it wasn’t so. Also what’s up with his personality? It went from goofy to overlord in like 10 chapters. I’ assuming the author didn’t want to write this book anymore and quickly finished up.

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