I honestly think this is interesting, but there are some flaws that bugs me. One, Mc whines about his evil plans and how he is going to get a harem but not like all the girls, like he takes favoritism and I think it was mentioned in the sypnosis or thr Auxiliar chapter but I can't remember. Second, the chapters are long, that's a plus but not when 95% of the chapters are pure monologue. I understand he is an angst guy to talk to other people but the fic progresses but there are barely any conversation between charactes only hinself talking about the progress he's made with the characters, we don't actually see the progress so that is fustrating and since the chapters are long like this, it becomes, sorry to say this but it becomes boring, I rather have a 700 words chapter with 70% conversations and 30% monologues than a long chapter with 95% monologue and 5% conversations. I am not saying the fanfic is bad, I'm just stating what I think are the flaws of this fanfic. Sorry, Author. As an author myself, I felt intertained to such an extent the first two chapter were awsome than his whining began and well, we don't like to hear about whining MCs now do we, so as a reader I have to tell you what I think about this book. I like the idea but not how it was presented, I'm not even angry about the gender mixups, that doesn't bother me because I understand as a nonenglish speaker you won't know the rules of Grammar but what I did not like most was the no conversations, I am in Chapter 11 and I think it has become a bit boring with just inner talks, tell me author, does this continues? and for how long? until what chapter does conversations start getting better? I want to start reading from there. Anyways, I hope you don't take this the wrong way like I said, I like the fanfic it's just the MC isn't what I call an MC😅
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