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Se7enAuthor3yr
2021-08-01 19:50

As a shameless author... Or very smart and cunning, I'm giving myself five stars, just because I can, and because that might be the only one I'll get... Sniff. (Feel sorry for me and give me five stars, hehe). I hope my story pleases you all, just as many of the stories here please and cheer me. :) I would also like you to tell me what I can improve on the fanfic, because it would improve the experience for you guys, and it would help me to write better (And learn English). But please, when commenting, be respectful. I would love to receive a negative review to help me improve, but I would be very disappointed (and perhaps annoyed) if I were only given name-calling and mockery. But I still hope you have fun reading and commenting, just as I had fun writing. Thanks Se7en! :)

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RikySmith123Lv4

will he have love interests and who?

Se7enAuthor

I'm developing the story to see which girl fits best as a love interest, but the one I want is the best character in the franchise, Luna Lovegood!

RikySmith123:will he have love interests and who?
ShadowMonaRCh001Lv1

It is nice reading something light and funny .also awaiting to see hiss pranks

JamesAnthony1999Lv14

Luna best girl. Also she can be such an interesting character that can be written in so many ways that are all enjoyable to read.

Se7en:I'm developing the story to see which girl fits best as a love interest, but the one I want is the best character in the franchise, Luna Lovegood!
SelectialsLv4

Надо ещё больше глав тебе делать.

Sin_of_GREEDLv14

so only one love interest??

Se7en:I'm developing the story to see which girl fits best as a love interest, but the one I want is the best character in the franchise, Luna Lovegood!
YearlyRainLv4

How long will this fanfic be???

KingOfGodsLv4

please let him learn observation haki through Occlumency training

Se7en:I'm developing the story to see which girl fits best as a love interest, but the one I want is the best character in the franchise, Luna Lovegood!
Daoist007877Lv2

What are you going to do about Greengrass and Davis. since they were looking at him like he doesn't exist, what are you going to do about them, he should just stop being with them then and if they act like he does not exist then he should do the same to them

LeylinTheFifthLv5

Just with this you have guaranteed all my support and stones , take them. It shall be like that until the end of time for Luna is justice , Luna is life , Luna is THE Waifu. Is there a possibility Mione can enter?

Se7en:I'm developing the story to see which girl fits best as a love interest, but the one I want is the best character in the franchise, Luna Lovegood!
KiyoungLv4

Will it have harem? Who are gonna be in the harem? Or is it a single FL? And who's the FL?

BigReader500Lv3

you sir are a sub if u think Hermione is am ideal girl never found what's so good about her even the actress who played her has a skinny figure. Face was ok I guess.

LeylinTheFifth:Just with this you have guaranteed all my support and stones , take them. It shall be like that until the end of time for Luna is justice , Luna is life , Luna is THE Waifu. Is there a possibility Mione can enter?
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LeylinTheFifthLv5

The thing is I'm way beyond just looking for thickness , I'm telling you from experience that dating dummy thick is annoying. I prefer having a Mione who is smart and beautiful than a stupid thick. And to support my decision try looking for a smart thick to see if she won't cheat on you , actually you don't need to look far and just type OnlyFans in your browser. I have dated a lot of through my life and I tell you , bro look for smart girls , your brain will thank you. To summarize , I think Mione and Luna are ideal girl because they are very intelligent and smart

BigReader500:you sir are a sub if u think Hermione is am ideal girl never found what's so good about her even the actress who played her has a skinny figure. Face was ok I guess.
DarkKnight32Lv6

i left this novel to gather chapters so what year is mc on did he graduate school?

Se7en:I'm developing the story to see which girl fits best as a love interest, but the one I want is the best character in the franchise, Luna Lovegood!
Victortoery12Lv2

Edit your previous chapters and correct your grammar, an author doesn’t just write a chapter and quit. They edit the chapters many times before they even publish, and edit even after publication.

TheDevilsRejectsLv3

Praise you for no harem my guy

Se7en:I'm developing the story to see which girl fits best as a love interest, but the one I want is the best character in the franchise, Luna Lovegood!
virusONtimezLv12

this author is vary smart FIVE STARS HE SHAL HAVEEEE

Wilder6Lv15

Love the story so far, it’s one of my favorite HP fanfics. I think your onto something great here, so keep it up and don’t listen to the hater’s. My only thought is that the story progress is to slow, would like if it was faster or you start writing more chapters. But overall it really great so thank you.

alaskan_42bLv13

your right you are shameless

OnigamiLv5

who is the MC's love interest?

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TheKindlyGentlemanLv6

Even Ignoring the fact that you can't train occlumecy without the assistance of a legilimens, that you can't successfully train controlled Magic until the age of 11, that occlumecy and legilimency take years to train to novice mastery, let alone the full mastery required to augment ones memories, that training one martial art to full mastery requires at least half a decade of dedicated work, let alone 4-8 martial arts with only semi-dedication, that you can't learn magical spells based upon what you've learned from movies and books from another life taught with the use of a wand in mind, wandlessly. Ignoring all of that, creating a character that is so Overpowered before Canon even starts, such that at his current rate of progression he will never be in danger at any point in the story, makes for a horribly boring and bland tale indeed. This is complete wish fulfillment, it is not at all realistic even for fantasy fiction. what's more the grammar while decent enough to read is still below average and often repetitive. all in all I recommend the author is clear and concise with whatever point they may be trying to get across, that they describe the environment around the character more often and in more detail, that they stop giving written diatribes of what the character plans to do and more of what they are currently doing, that they make the character face danger and adversity more often and that the character is given more of a personality, with faults and quirks and that the character is not so strong so fast, AT MOST they should be at the level of a third year at the end of the first year.

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