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DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv142yr
2021-11-26 23:35

So my review was deleted but the countless of 5/5 reviews that are from the same accounts stay? Story HAD potential but it became garbage. You can skip the trash parts aka the vault parts and still know everything so you wont miss anything. MC gets embarrassed by Wormtail and loses an eye lol i wouod go more into detail eith how bad this fic is wnd how much of s waste of time it is but slim chance anyone will read this review lol too many reviews and so many repeated 5/5 reviews that wont get deleted but mine will lol garbage story

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

FictionOnlyReader
4.6
442 Chs

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LunariaN
LunariaNLv5

to put it simply, you hate this fic cuz MC make mistakes, and is not someone who is Godly and can blink anyone from existence. MC is simply a human who uses hid gifts effectively, if you are searching for someone who can blink his enemies from existence then this is not your place. saying fic is a trash just cuz MC got in his own adventure and didn't try to involve in plot along with getting injuried from someone who have became OOC btw since this is AU, and I can say that Wormtail in this fic is dangerous, and I am not refering to his powress, but his mind. even his master voldemort does not trust him which very much tells that he is highly dangerous (in the form of patience, schemes . . . ) so in short you probably skipped most of the fic, and you dare complain about you don't understand and try wording it like you've gone throught every single chapter properly when you clearly skipped most of it which make your jugement just plain bs with no true proofs . . .SO,

2yr
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FictionOnlyReader
FictionOnlyReaderAuthor

Thank you.

LunariaN:to put it simply, you hate this fic cuz MC make mistakes, and is not someone who is Godly and can blink anyone from existence. MC is simply a human who uses hid gifts effectively, if you are searching for someone who can blink his enemies from existence then this is not your place. saying fic is a trash just cuz MC got in his own adventure and didn't try to involve in plot along with getting injuried from someone who have became OOC btw since this is AU, and I can say that Wormtail in this fic is dangerous, and I am not refering to his powress, but his mind. even his master voldemort does not trust him which very much tells that he is highly dangerous (in the form of patience, schemes . . . ) so in short you probably skipped most of the fic, and you dare complain about you don't understand and try wording it like you've gone throught every single chapter properly when you clearly skipped most of it which make your jugement just plain bs with no true proofs . . .SO,
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2yr
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LunariaN
LunariaNLv5

I only stated whats on my mind

FictionOnlyReader:Thank you.
2yr
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Jonnyofsin
JonnyofsinLv11

why spoiler wormtail takes the MCs eye

2yr
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gotnerfed
gotnerfedLv1

Louderrrrrrr

2yr
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anime_god_9144
anime_god_9144Lv10

I like this wormtail more than the original.

2yr
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FictionOnlyReader
FictionOnlyReaderAuthor

Review #2 [FictionOnlyReaders' Author Review] At the time of this post, this review is the 269th review of this story. (200+Nice!) Current Story stats: Regular chapters: 125 || Aux chapters: 1 Collections: 11.55K || Views: 3.47M || Average Word Count: 3.36K || Rating: 4.84 Stars My rating: 5 STARS || Reason: Because I like my story, that's it. My review was too long and wasn't being accepted, so I have broken it down and put it in comments. Please go down to see the rest. Just like always, Review, comment, add to the library and share this fic. Thx. Regards, FictionOnlyReader (LET'S GO!)

3yr

NotSoBigShlong
NotSoBigShlongLv14

Sad to see youre not doing kuroko no basuke fic anymore....hope you can get back on thst soon 😭😭. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . .

3yr
Geraint124x
Geraint124xLv5

It's a little sad that you can't still write or update on your KnB Fanfic after waiting for more than 5 months. I guess I'll read this for now for the time being while I write my Paimon fanfic. Here's some 5 star from me. I'm grad that you're still doing okay.

3yr
1step1kill
1step1killLv5

Normally I just read and don't leave any comments but I had to leave a review for this one. This fanfiction started off with a decent idea, waking up in a wealthy pure blood child and practicing magic like a fanfiction addict would. The author ruined the fanfiction for me when the mc: 1. Had a magic core and goes through 'growth' phases at certain ages. 2. Chose to go to Hogwarts when as a Harry Potter fan you know the teachers suck and the standards are terrible. 3. Made wands the devil, where the mc is afraid of using a wand as it will stop his core's growth. 4. Uses and practices wandless magic in front of students and at students without a cover (his fake wand which he left in his room for some reason) while saying he's trying to keep it a secret (I guess he forgot about all the portraits spying too). 5. Reused lines from the original story even though it takes place like a year earlier (I guess Dumbledore uses the same lines every year now) 6. very bad romance with a 12 year old.

3yr
Sevennamed
SevennamedLv12

There are a couple of things I really dislike about this story: I absolutely loathe transmigration with memory / identity loss tropes. I believe it's the lowest form of fanfiction. There's something very off about the sentence structure and grammar that makes this story uncomfortable to read. 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

3yr
Reader_Harris
Reader_HarrisLv10

The author had a generally good idea but he ruined it because he had to throw roadblocks like an idiot. I feel very justified to say I should’ve never picked up this story.

3yr
Thigs_0508
Thigs_0508Lv3

the author wanted to create an MC Op in the Hp world, but he didn't want this MC to change the canon, so you ask me how the author compensated for the presence of the MC and the canon remaining the same? the potters survived and had 2 children, so he justified that it's "AU" and in all the remarkable moments in the canon it happened the same because it's an "Au" or the MC becomes incredibly dumb or he becomes weak in moments that you need to use the power

3yr
Archonstine
ArchonstineLv5

Buddy, after reading the first two chapters of this fan fiction, there is only one thing I want to say. Thank you. Finally a character who is not overpowered and doesn't start practicing the goddamn unforgivables by the age of 11 and actually experiences difficulty in harnessing his accidental magic. Just like you I am an avid reader of the Harry Potter fabrications and have read close to 800 of them. Out of all of them, I only managed to find less than 10 which explored the journey of learning magic realistically. So the fact that you are doing just that and addressing issues that other fanfics don't usually deal I'm like guilt, is a huge win in my opinion. Your grammar is near perfect and the conversations font seem forced, so I am sticking with this. Hope you don't hit a writer's block on this book as well, cause I like your other fabric and have still not given up on it.

3yr
WealthyRaccoon
WealthyRaccoonLv14

a whole lot of build up with zero pay off, author and MC are far far too passive to the point where it's just the Harry potter books with a side character who should be and could be doing more. look at the last 20 chapters and you'll find countless readers complaining and frankly the author deserves far worse. nothing but a drought of creativity.

3yr
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