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2021-11-26 15:35

So my review was deleted but the countless of 5/5 reviews that are from the same accounts stay? Story HAD potential but it became garbage. You can skip the trash parts aka the vault parts and still know everything so you wont miss anything. MC gets embarrassed by Wormtail and loses an eye lol i wouod go more into detail eith how bad this fic is wnd how much of s waste of time it is but slim chance anyone will read this review lol too many reviews and so many repeated 5/5 reviews that wont get deleted but mine will lol garbage story

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LunariaNLv5

to put it simply, you hate this fic cuz MC make mistakes, and is not someone who is Godly and can blink anyone from existence. MC is simply a human who uses hid gifts effectively, if you are searching for someone who can blink his enemies from existence then this is not your place. saying fic is a trash just cuz MC got in his own adventure and didn't try to involve in plot along with getting injuried from someone who have became OOC btw since this is AU, and I can say that Wormtail in this fic is dangerous, and I am not refering to his powress, but his mind. even his master voldemort does not trust him which very much tells that he is highly dangerous (in the form of patience, schemes . . . ) so in short you probably skipped most of the fic, and you dare complain about you don't understand and try wording it like you've gone throught every single chapter properly when you clearly skipped most of it which make your jugement just plain bs with no true proofs . . .SO,

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LunariaN:to put it simply, you hate this fic cuz MC make mistakes, and is not someone who is Godly and can blink anyone from existence. MC is simply a human who uses hid gifts effectively, if you are searching for someone who can blink his enemies from existence then this is not your place. saying fic is a trash just cuz MC got in his own adventure and didn't try to involve in plot along with getting injuried from someone who have became OOC btw since this is AU, and I can say that Wormtail in this fic is dangerous, and I am not refering to his powress, but his mind. even his master voldemort does not trust him which very much tells that he is highly dangerous (in the form of patience, schemes . . . ) so in short you probably skipped most of the fic, and you dare complain about you don't understand and try wording it like you've gone throught every single chapter properly when you clearly skipped most of it which make your jugement just plain bs with no true proofs . . .SO,
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LunariaNLv5

I only stated whats on my mind

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JonnyLawz0Lv12

why spoiler wormtail takes the MCs eye

gotnerfedLv1

Louderrrrrrr

anime_god_9144Lv10

I like this wormtail more than the original.

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