So my review was deleted but the countless of 5/5 reviews that are from the same accounts stay? Story HAD potential but it became garbage. You can skip the trash parts aka the vault parts and still know everything so you wont miss anything. MC gets embarrassed by Wormtail and loses an eye lol i wouod go more into detail eith how bad this fic is wnd how much of s waste of time it is but slim chance anyone will read this review lol too many reviews and so many repeated 5/5 reviews that wont get deleted but mine will lol garbage story
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to put it simply, you hate this fic cuz MC make mistakes, and is not someone who is Godly and can blink anyone from existence. MC is simply a human who uses hid gifts effectively, if you are searching for someone who can blink his enemies from existence then this is not your place. saying fic is a trash just cuz MC got in his own adventure and didn't try to involve in plot along with getting injuried from someone who have became OOC btw since this is AU, and I can say that Wormtail in this fic is dangerous, and I am not refering to his powress, but his mind. even his master voldemort does not trust him which very much tells that he is highly dangerous (in the form of patience, schemes . . . ) so in short you probably skipped most of the fic, and you dare complain about you don't understand and try wording it like you've gone throught every single chapter properly when you clearly skipped most of it which make your jugement just plain bs with no true proofs . . .SO,
Thank you.
I only stated whats on my mind
why spoiler wormtail takes the MCs eye
Louderrrrrrr
I like this wormtail more than the original.
Man shut the fuck up, the Mc from this novel is stupidely overpowered, makes absolutely no mistakes and is a gary stu THIS NOVEL IS TRASH, and that's there's about it
His adventure is trash, boring and does not fit hp
complaining about a completed book is useless, you won't change anything, and nobody will care what you think now, it is Finished. complain about the book, not come to me another reader and start telling me to shut up because I complement it, everyone have their taste, and have the right to read what they like, you can't just come and tell them to stay quiet and stop them from complementing a book they like simply, because you don't like it yourself, you are simply projecting yourself on others, and it's kinda weird for you to throw insults on a comment that is more than 3 years old...
I don't see how that's my problem? I like it, you dislike it, that's all about it. I'm not gonna judge you for it, because it's a matter of personal opinion, so stop trying to judge me with your standards, we are not the same for you to hold me to your standards, nor will I hold you to mine.
It's not subjective, it's trash It doesn't that you're going to act like "B-but it's my opinion" if you're going out of your fucking way to trash on other people's reviews
I'll whenever the fuck i want and you have absolutely no way to stop that, who cares if the books are completed? If the author doesn't like criticism, then delete it, so no one else can read it nor review it. The original Hp books are also completed and people still review it everyday Stop backpedalling, before you were saying that i can have my opinion and you can have yours, now you're saying i shouldn't give my opinion, i'll do what i want
It's literally what you did dumb fuck
So you read the comment you said and still said all this stupid shit? Man your argument is all over the place
yeah, keep seething and boiling in your rage, while I don't care about your existence.
what you're giving is not an opinion, but just a complain without any proof, or solid argument, those are different, and your complains won't change anything in the story, because it's already complete. and opinion is valid criticism supported by valud argument, expressing your view of the book and support it by an argument instead you gave two lines complaining about mc and his adventure.
You literally posted 2 comments answering me Lil bro, how is that not acknowledging?
I said the novel is trash because it's trash my ngga, and contrary to your beliefs, creating your own trashy adventures doesn't make anything better
I read 300 chapter lil bro 😭🙏🙏🙏🙏 It seems like you didn't read the own novel you're defending lol You literally were the one that said that your comment is 3 years old and now somehow you're supposed to have more knowledge about the novelnthan me that started reading this month? It's clear you’re just debating for the sake of wanting to feel right, it's sad that these years didn't give you enough maturity to not be childsih, your arguments are genuinely all over the place
