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Louderrrrrrr
Quite disappointed here tho....
He got a new gf with the most annoying character in novel—and her 1st gf don't mind it after talking... He also promised the 2nd gf that she well not regrey it. Just take care of your bloody pressure.
It was already good (forget the dull and dragging chapters) but WHYYYYYYY! the author ruined it. I invested time and sleep here. :<
Disappointed here too
Well, if u don't like harem then don't. If u want keep sane just love. If u don't want to be disappointed then don't. If u want a nicely executed "harem" go read it. Im dropping this. Ivy just stress me. P.S. Try to love Ivy at the very beginning, so u won't be full of some emotions that can make rile up in the comment section.
The narration is good but i get confused sometimes, ffs are for satisfaction of a writer and readers (who can't put imagination into words) of course this 5, I can't feel Quinn—that's quite a problem for me i can't grasp him —his character, when im reading there's a barrier when I'm trying to reach him and get a grip of his character unlike with Eddie, and i did get a grip on him in dolores arc, just a bit. You researched a lot that's all i can say (lol), u have a good grasp in settings so 5. P.s. Just work on how you deliver the MC's character, don't make him/her too passive. Pps. Just my own opinion that was based of my own preferences.
I hate her, just disappear, ivy.
Hail daphne x quinn!!