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Archonstine
ArchonstineLv53yr
2021-03-09 07:12

Buddy, after reading the first two chapters of this fan fiction, there is only one thing I want to say. Thank you. Finally a character who is not overpowered and doesn't start practicing the goddamn unforgivables by the age of 11 and actually experiences difficulty in harnessing his accidental magic. Just like you I am an avid reader of the Harry Potter fabrications and have read close to 800 of them. Out of all of them, I only managed to find less than 10 which explored the journey of learning magic realistically. So the fact that you are doing just that and addressing issues that other fanfics don't usually deal I'm like guilt, is a huge win in my opinion. Your grammar is near perfect and the conversations font seem forced, so I am sticking with this. Hope you don't hit a writer's block on this book as well, cause I like your other fabric and have still not given up on it.

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Titus17
Titus17Lv10

if you are avid reader of the Harry Potter like you said can you recommend a good harry potter fanfictions?

Archonstine
ArchonstineLv5

Sure, the best ones according to me are: Methods of Rationality Prince of Slytherin Rise of the Wizards Saviour of Magic Poison Pen Honour Thy Blood Green in the Grey Stepping Back Three Black Birds Rebirth in the Magical World Dark Prince Trickshot I'm not a hero The Cadmean Victory Ascension Make a Wish A Champion's new Hope, etc....

Titus17:if you are avid reader of the Harry Potter like you said can you recommend a good harry potter fanfictions?
Titus17
Titus17Lv10

Thank you very much!!

Archonstine:Sure, the best ones according to me are: Methods of Rationality Prince of Slytherin Rise of the Wizards Saviour of Magic Poison Pen Honour Thy Blood Green in the Grey Stepping Back Three Black Birds Rebirth in the Magical World Dark Prince Trickshot I'm not a hero The Cadmean Victory Ascension Make a Wish A Champion's new Hope, etc....
Herach
HerachLv4

Oof. Whenever I see someone who's read many fanfics but still think MoR is good I question their further taste..I'll be skipping this fanfic then.

Archonstine:Sure, the best ones according to me are: Methods of Rationality Prince of Slytherin Rise of the Wizards Saviour of Magic Poison Pen Honour Thy Blood Green in the Grey Stepping Back Three Black Birds Rebirth in the Magical World Dark Prince Trickshot I'm not a hero The Cadmean Victory Ascension Make a Wish A Champion's new Hope, etc....
Archonstine
ArchonstineLv5

I personally didn't enjoy it like the others and had to soldier through some chapters cause I got bored in the middle, but the overall theme is pretty good and there is no denying that it is extremely well written.

Herach:Oof. Whenever I see someone who's read many fanfics but still think MoR is good I question their further taste..I'll be skipping this fanfic then.
Herach
HerachLv4

I just can't stand the tone of the entire thing. I find it so cringeworthy that I'm having trouble just getting through a chapter at a time. I know many people have favorited it but most who read more fanfiction agree that it's not a fun read. In actuality I have a problem with most who try to handle magic in a "Scientific way" as they take it way too far. It becomes very cringe quickly and the fun and fantasy disappears.

Archonstine:I personally didn't enjoy it like the others and had to soldier through some chapters cause I got bored in the middle, but the overall theme is pretty good and there is no denying that it is extremely well written.
Shinobu
ShinobuLv15

list of great hp ff ♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾♾⚛️♾⚛️♾⚛️♾

Archonstine:Sure, the best ones according to me are: Methods of Rationality Prince of Slytherin Rise of the Wizards Saviour of Magic Poison Pen Honour Thy Blood Green in the Grey Stepping Back Three Black Birds Rebirth in the Magical World Dark Prince Trickshot I'm not a hero The Cadmean Victory Ascension Make a Wish A Champion's new Hope, etc....
VermillionAce
VermillionAceLv4

Have you read Harry Crow? Its good in my opinion...

Archonstine:Sure, the best ones according to me are: Methods of Rationality Prince of Slytherin Rise of the Wizards Saviour of Magic Poison Pen Honour Thy Blood Green in the Grey Stepping Back Three Black Birds Rebirth in the Magical World Dark Prince Trickshot I'm not a hero The Cadmean Victory Ascension Make a Wish A Champion's new Hope, etc....
Archonstine
ArchonstineLv5

I did, it's pretty good but also unrealistic and idealistic.

VermillionAce:Have you read Harry Crow? Its good in my opinion...
Should_Be_Working
Should_Be_WorkingLv3

Is he talented or strong? (Realistically so by real hp standards not FF standards). I understand your dislike for most fanfics as the power ups make no sense or just straight up go against the OG storys laws and rules, but I also cant stand it when FF become realistic to the point of making the making the mc weak and basically useless. I read fanfics as a way of imagining myself as the mc into a story I fantasized and wish myself in, I most certainly would want to be a least talented and capable in such circumstances yaknow?

Chris_Cyrus
Chris_CyrusLv4

Lol this story is such a disappointment compared to those Fics

Archonstine:Sure, the best ones according to me are: Methods of Rationality Prince of Slytherin Rise of the Wizards Saviour of Magic Poison Pen Honour Thy Blood Green in the Grey Stepping Back Three Black Birds Rebirth in the Magical World Dark Prince Trickshot I'm not a hero The Cadmean Victory Ascension Make a Wish A Champion's new Hope, etc....
ouragan_
ouragan_Lv13

I will add "a bend in time" to this list

Goat13
Goat13Lv4

Please give this peasant some HP recommendations.

Archonstine
ArchonstineLv5

Bro, check the replies to this review.

Goat13:Please give this peasant some HP recommendations.
Noel_Elitia
Noel_ElitiaLv1

try reading when i got reincarnated as a spider with my goddess you won't be disappointed

Imnyu
ImnyuLv11

thank you

Archonstine:Sure, the best ones according to me are: Methods of Rationality Prince of Slytherin Rise of the Wizards Saviour of Magic Poison Pen Honour Thy Blood Green in the Grey Stepping Back Three Black Birds Rebirth in the Magical World Dark Prince Trickshot I'm not a hero The Cadmean Victory Ascension Make a Wish A Champion's new Hope, etc....
Imnyu
ImnyuLv11

l

Imnyu:thank you
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