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CelebiiiiiiiiiiiiiLv13yr
2021-11-04 23:26

I was a Patreon for a few months and really liked this the first like 160 chapters. It was fun to read about the vaults, magic, and Quinn as a person. However the author now is clearly trying to milk Patreon given how lengthy the social fillers were and fourth year, as well as the stupidity of Quinn KNOWING Voldemort’s plans fully and yet still had no plans to get rid of the horcruxes and the war effort before it could escalate. Not to mention we follow canon events and timeline and of course he would end up getting involved with the trio. Add onto a very annoying romance set up with unlikable one dimensional teenage girls - basically no personality and can use one adjective to describe them, and I’m no longer interested. Now it’s just not worth anyone’s time

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Lyrical_Ivo
Lyrical_IvoLv14

Can you tell me who eventually becomes His GirLfriend

anime_god_9144
anime_god_9144Lv10

and u should have already known that the author is following the original plot line. year wise.

M1XALI0
M1XALI0Lv14

it became a stupid harem(not only that it felt very forced and very out of character

Lyrical_Ivo:Can you tell me who eventually becomes His GirLfriend
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