Lyrical_Ivo

Okay I can’t stand this anymore mc is a cornball all this coward sneaking around and nonsensical acts I can’t do this anymore shit is dropped. Copy and paste mc from the other trash can fanfictions

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you are correct i started loving it.

Is he gonna be lowkey all novel and this novel be boring?

I’m loving this I just bought your Patreon my man. This story is 10/10 I was picturing him standing with his hands in his pockets like sung Jin woo batterd up while fighting sasuke

Author you suck

First some goofy cold that an average human could beat quite easily nerfed the hell out of him and now he just got stomped on again this if becoming unbearable

im so confused we are on chapter 20 and the mc has legit done absoultely nothing for the story. i feel like im just reading the actual dxd with an extra character who talks unessary

Your chapters are to short and half the pages are you talking about the fanfiction and not actually writing it. 3/9 pages are actual story

Bro 400 chapters gone down the drain. All the time I spent reading this. You have taught me a lesson and that’s to always spoil myself at the end to see