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Tftc

Coruscant has a population of one billion. There is certainly no shortage of potential personnel in the galaxy for a private army; Anakin could establish his own intelligence network and deploy operatives across various sectors as mercenaries, bureaucrats, or security agents. By recruiting individuals from the underworlds of Coruscant or Nar Shaddaa, or from desert worlds like Tatooine, and offering them a future, he could attract a significant following. All it takes is providing an escape from poverty or the chance to explore the galaxy beyond their confined home worlds. after all, it is no coincidence that the Empire was able to find competent personnel so quickly.

I made a prediction: Vardis will end up with Schmi, and they will become the future leaders of a young, powerful conglomerate—such as the InterGalactic Banking Clan, the Techno Union, or the Trade Federation. I’d really like to see Anakin create a virus—like the Clone Commandos did—to steal money from the Banking Clan by siphoning one credit from every account and building up a secret emergency fund.

a good chapter

For now, I get the impression that Harry is the fifth wheel and lacks a personality of his own.

tftc, I think the MC is too close to Harry; I hope he distances himself later on and remains just an advisor or a source of support...

That makes sense, given that not all wizards go to Hogwarts some are surely even homeschooled.

Good chapter, but since he used magic in the Muggle world, he's supposed to receive a warning, right?

The phoenix symbolizes death and rebirth, and the yew tree symbolizes death.

The castle hides many secrets, his more mature personality would lead him more towards Ravenclaw, and notably, the house ghost, you add that to a head of the house is good dualist. Changing pets could be interesting; rather than the usual owl, a Kneazle is more interesting, especially since it can pass for a Maine Coon; for an American, that could be quite good.