I am so confused when it comes to the timeline and the ages of people in this fic. From the timeline I can find, in the 38th year of Konoha Tsunade was like 12 years old, Kakashi wouldn't be born for another 13 years, and the second ninja war wouldn't start for 2 more years. But we met Kakashi in an earlier chapter. and you said that the MC and the group would be in their 20s during the Nine-tails attack...but Kakashi is like 13-14 years old when that happens..so how could the MC have met him when he was like 4 years old? It's all just very confusing to me. Fair enough if you've changed some ages, I'd just like to know them so I can keep track..

Had forgotten it existed. Now I dislike it even more than I did back then.

isn't that just like rainforests and stuff, though? and very specific kinds of scorpion? Though I could be wrong, not my area of expertise. It just feels like a very odd choice of main pet when the MC is in Konoha. It feels off, like you just choose it to be different for no reason.

but you labelled it as Harem. Is it a harem story where the girls just want to be with him, but he refuses because of his sainthood?

Scorpion? this is supposed to be Konoha...right? Not Suna or something..

Yeah okay this is pretty cringe..MC act super unnatural, and very odd. He clearly can't keep a conversation with anyone if he talks like that. The library of heaven's path which i was looking forward to was used in an incredibly boring way. Overall, the MC is trash. And not the good kind. The story seems to be him just chasing chicks, which might fit some people. I was hoping for more. You need to work on how to write both descriptive text and most importantly dialogue. It just doesn't flow well anywhere and nobody talks like actual people.

promise*

Don't overwork yourself. and don't overpromose either. you're doing great! I'm just happy i don't have to go through the mtl myself...

This right here must have been written by an incel, nobody can convince me otherwise 😅 But also, if you actually were concerned about it, the godly system kind of requires people to have remained pure in a sense for their entire life in this universe. This is why characters with more than one partner never reach the same heights in the godly realm. Not that it would matter, but I can guarantee that she is a virgin.

I mistook her birthday. I thought it was in September...So she's 11, and she would be like 145 or so. Especially since she has tall siblings.

Bruh, how short do you think 12 year old girls are? She should be around 150cm tall, so way taller than his 120cm.

could someone confirm how many chapters there are in the raws? I can't copy the title to search for it..

Stop straight up copying text from the wiki.

imagine dropping out of school and yet Apparition is one of the 4 things you know...and Obliviation is another. Like where are the basics?

Wasn't he 2 years younger than Regulus? so he'd be born in 1963. Are you saying that the year is 1988?

What an absolute loser mindset this dude has. Like literally blames the world for his shortcomings. But I have found that this kind of idiotic way of thinking is rather common in Chinese isekai media. It's really just Incel behaviour, and through these stories they write that they changed and "now get mad puss" to say it in a cringe way.

but that goes completely against all logic, surely? If he doesn't learn anything at the academy for the first two years (the two examples you gave are things he learns outside of the academy), then those should be the years he skips. Not the latter, more useful years, when he has more resources to learn from.

I'm just saying you did make Hiruzen out to be as bad or worse than Orochimaru here. At least Orochimaru was honest with his testing. He didn't try to manipulate consent. If I found out that someone had done to me what Hiruzen is trying to, I'd never have even an ounce of faith in them ever again.

But you've specifically shown that he's not progressing while at the academy and won't do so until the third year curriculum. So, staying at the academy for another year is what's wasting a year of progress. Like, what are you talking about?

I haven't read this, and I don't read much on WebNovel. From my own experience, it's hard to make a connected story from AI. it tends to disregard things said a while ago, and it doesn't like to connect different things it says. Are you sure it's not just translate using AI? That will leave you with a similar AI touch but it'll still have a connected story since the base material is meant to be that way.