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TagDaReaper
TagDaReaperLv53yr
2021-05-08 18:39

The story is getting worse as it progresses. MC was cautious and smart at the start, then he became dumber as the story progressed. He became dumbest when he got a companion fairy. Then he forgot almost all his gaming knowledge. Earlier when he thought that death was permanent, he was fine killing fellow humans. Later he found out it was only temporary, now he spares other humans. His personality also changed. Now he likes showing off and not finishing the fights quickly. I stuck so far because i liked the starting. I still think it would have been an excellent story if the author didn't purposely made it worse. To keep the story excellent all he had to do was make the MC's character consistent. Was is too much to ask for?

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CriticalReader
CriticalReaderLv2

It is normal for novels on this site to focus on being cool, only to end up cringe and repulsive

DaoistahFek8
DaoistahFek8Lv3

Ty for takin the bullet

DaoistJang01
DaoistJang01Lv11

was about to read it but saw your review ty chief

assaultlife69
assaultlife69Lv15

Thanks for the honest comment was about to waste my time.

Tappymaru
TappymaruLv11

thanks for the save

xFKratos
xFKratosLv15

Thanks for the review. I Seriously don't understand why so many authors think people want to read the story of dumb brainless mcs. This is seriously beyond me.

Gutless_Hero_3
Gutless_Hero_3Lv1

yeah, it's like they are brain dead themselves 🤷

xFKratos:Thanks for the review. I Seriously don't understand why so many authors think people want to read the story of dumb brainless mcs. This is seriously beyond me.
PRAISE_EZEKWE
PRAISE_EZEKWELv1

was just about to start reading it 😪😪

Blue_Bird_0758
Blue_Bird_0758Lv4

I agree with you bro ... this novel sucks 😆 I think author was having a glass of wine when he was writing this novel😂

Riritsut_Kanarai
Riritsut_KanaraiLv3

117 this is UNSC, mission abort and return to base.

Benard_Tom
Benard_TomLv1

I need you to review mine..... Just started

VoraciousReader2
VoraciousReader2Lv11

read upto 509 chs the mc charecter has some flaws in the start but it gets fixed later on just hold upto 70 chs then the story becomes more interesting and charecter stay stable ull start enjoying it once u reach the 100th chs just hold in the start

BL00DY
BL00DYLv4

He is in new world without any help and any information, character changes are unavoidable during early chapters, he isn't dumb and he never was in any of chapters, more like ignorant because of situation he was in. But ofc you are just too dumb to understand it. 😉

N0_Hope
N0_HopeLv2

Thanks for warning me of this TRASH. if the author is incapable of making a regular MC and variates personalities it makes the story sooo boring.

AskAndzar
AskAndzarLv12

You should read carefully, the author describe him as an apex player with good mechanic and skill. Of course we assume that he was quite knowledgeable about game, but he keeps acting like a total newbie ever since he get the fairy. It contradicts the description of the mc in the start of the game.

BL00DY:He is in new world without any help and any information, character changes are unavoidable during early chapters, he isn't dumb and he never was in any of chapters, more like ignorant because of situation he was in. But ofc you are just too dumb to understand it. 😉
BL00DY
BL00DYLv4

... did you even read my comment? certainly not if you still wrote this bs 🙂

AskAndzar:You should read carefully, the author describe him as an apex player with good mechanic and skill. Of course we assume that he was quite knowledgeable about game, but he keeps acting like a total newbie ever since he get the fairy. It contradicts the description of the mc in the start of the game.
Matrino
MatrinoLv2

You said ignorant. He is not. Stop calling people dumb, when you don't even know the meanings of the words you use.

BL00DY:... did you even read my comment? certainly not if you still wrote this bs 🙂
BL00DY
BL00DYLv4

you are just too dumb :(

Matrino:You said ignorant. He is not. Stop calling people dumb, when you don't even know the meanings of the words you use.
lonewolf_1214
lonewolf_1214Lv1

👍

Eccouga
EccougaLv3

BL00DY:He is in new world without any help and any information, character changes are unavoidable during early chapters, he isn't dumb and he never was in any of chapters, more like ignorant because of situation he was in. But ofc you are just too dumb to understand it. 😉
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SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
SUBSCRIBE_MY_LISTLv5

The mc starts of strong, pragmatic and grounded. Then he gets a fairy guide and turns into a weak, scatterbrained moron. I liked the initial 25 or so chapters of the story, but with the complete 180 in personality and competence, it began to just grind on my nerves. It showed in the fights of chapter 28 and 29, then with him going from a hoarder on the avarage skyrim player level in chapter to some moron at chapter 30 who doesn't want to pick up loot because he doesn't use those items... When he's carrying a back full of junk items to sell... And needing his fairy guide to point out the obvious in a ridiculing manner, I dropped It. The way I see it, it's like two people worked on this story, the first 25 chapters or so were by a person who liked to write a competent story but lost interest. And the second by a person who had a total thing for the usual incompetant characters who need minders to tell their left hand from their right, along with tropes and clichés. Its like seeing a high rated Litrpg novel start, only to have some weebo wanting it into some kind of mix wuxia / harem anime hybrid. Perhaps the story was written by copy pasting events from other novels, then having the patchwork rewritten as one thing to make it a whole, without keeping the character and his personality in mind. That's not a bad way to write a new story, after all originality these days is just well stolen concepts applied in uncommon ways, but the loss of sight of the character's original engaging personality causing it to be exchanged for a moron with an overbearing fairy who needs to hold his hand lest he trips over his own feet is not cool. I think I would be much more interested in the story if the MC was more consistent in his character.

Althen
AlthenLv5

Here we go. I’m at around chapter 85. Loved how it started, author covered the basics, why the MC knows this and that,etc. I love the gaming elements novels, and the mystery with the character that dies with a couple of great items but not breaking balance completely is done well. Now unfortunately it gets worse. The MC is introduced as a veteran gamer of various VR games, with at least some training in martial arts. Then as the game keeps goings he forgets more and more of this gaming knowledge (note, im ok with him not being an expert or godly reflexes,etc, but not evolving as fast as you can inspect, making noob mistakes and forgetting basic gaming elements… I hate when you dumb an MC). We add to that a helper, a guide in the form of a fairy. I like that, even when she does not tell you everything, but only if the reason is because she can’t (rules). Defenetly not because of her ego, snappy remarks, rudeness, sense of superiority, etc. And the MC reactions being to act timidly and senseless. I also did not like him keeping a guy who gets into trouble to hide under you after throwing the rock. Really? That’s the companion he wants to stick with? Finally, I am going after starting a quest where he knows he is being manipulated, knows a solution (kill him or blackmail him back, or at least tell the truth about the quest) and still does nothing. Once this issues are solved the novel can be quite good. Good idea, good background, good writing and stable updates. But the before mentioned just makes it more unbereable the more you read. Keep it up author, it’s good work, but try to improve on the mentioned.

Rakib_Hasan_0001
Rakib_Hasan_0001Lv4

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