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he literally could put a knife through even his friends heart.
my thoughts exactly. he specifically triggered the whole situation
maybe less depending on how long the honeymoon lastet
should be around 3 months i think
makes sense, since a day is twice as long as half a day.
when he bought it previously it was compared to work like a boomerang, yes
Why do we get half a chapter thats literally just a recap from a couple chapters before
this argument is used so often in isekais while never making sense. Did he have Secrets? Yes. But he was him from the start and never someone else.
that wouldnt push the wordcount though
Sounded interesting but dropping it after 40chapters. To me it seems like its written for amall kids (except 18+scenes) like everything is shiny, the most beautiful, feels the best and so on. Story isnt coherent or logically. One second he sits at his wedding celebration and the next moment we are on the other side of the planet doing something entirely different. Power and abilities dont really fit very well imo. And we are regularly reminded that we are reading and nnot experiencing a sstory by sentences as "our protagonist did this and that..."
so to get this straight he just up and disappeared from his marriage celebration. without any word or explanation whatsoever and we somehow just glance over it. Guess imma drop this soon.
sharp is not an attribute of steel.
mate an hour has 60min not 100. so it would even be 12*8
70km diameter that has to be the absolut ghosttown of a camp with the amount of people on that space.
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yeah those dimensions make no sense at all considering we have starfields which have planets with billions and trilions of people. With that sice it could barely fit 1 of those planets.
can we stay with like either normal measurements or american ones. The back and forth is confusing.
Instead of saying "this took a long time to describe". Something like "The whole exchange only took a couple miliseconds" or something along those lines would be much better. You should write thr story and not about you writing the story. That is intrusive and interrupting the flow.