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glacer_blade
glacer_bladeLv44yr
2021-02-22 22:50

great story,the bad things that I think should be improve in the story is the mc intelligence, not a smart in not to stupid mc but sometime mc don't think enough or analysis more in certain situation so more failure hope it get better in the way the story progress and my personal problem is now he got a guide and there interaction in mc being dumb and I hate that, as a reader I want the mc to be smarter or use some thinking when he is talking to other people.

Second World

UnrivaledArcaner
4.2
2012 Chs

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Jdnufhsbsb
JdnufhsbsbLv3

I understand what you’re saying, but before you talk about how dumb the MC is, you should practice your grammar. Thank you!

3yr
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Listlessthomas
ListlessthomasLv14

dude was just sharing his opinion as some authors do like when the readers do this. yeah his grammar is poor but mans didnt need to be dissed about it on a web novel app (also my experience wIth app is the auto correct funtion kinda bugs out also itS a phone keyboard not an actual keyboard people tend to fat finger things)

Jdnufhsbsb:I understand what you’re saying, but before you talk about how dumb the MC is, you should practice your grammar. Thank you!
3yr
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Listlessthomas
ListlessthomasLv14

Maybe thats the kind of mc he is kinda of head first into situations not every mc needs to be a 1000 iq predict the future prodigy sometimes having something other than basicness is needed

3yr
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AncientGodDragon
AncientGodDragonLv5

I read upto 310 chapters and theres no way this book deserves a single star. Don't waste your resources on this.

3yr
11
Ugly_dude
Ugly_dudeLv13

Nono, your opinion thinks that, my opinion is that the MC is a person who makes mistakes, if you want a perfect MC go look for other novels

AncientGodDragon:I read upto 310 chapters and theres no way this book deserves a single star. Don't waste your resources on this.
3yr
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AncientGodDragon
AncientGodDragonLv5

Roger that

Ugly_dude:Nono, your opinion thinks that, my opinion is that the MC is a person who makes mistakes, if you want a perfect MC go look for other novels
3yr
4
ChangerOfNames
ChangerOfNamesLv14

what if somebody made a homegrown dnd campaign based off of a few different novels, then used it to create a novel, with the players, as the main characters

Ugly_dude:Nono, your opinion thinks that, my opinion is that the MC is a person who makes mistakes, if you want a perfect MC go look for other novels
3yr
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Tomi_S_3740
Tomi_S_3740Lv1

why the 5 stars then, its like you dont take your own words seriously

3yr
1
Tomi_S_3740
Tomi_S_3740Lv1

how is grammar related to intelligence? you would get along with the mc

Jdnufhsbsb:I understand what you’re saying, but before you talk about how dumb the MC is, you should practice your grammar. Thank you!
3yr
3
Maximilian_Meister
Maximilian_MeisterLv15

not true it is a good story

AncientGodDragon:I read upto 310 chapters and theres no way this book deserves a single star. Don't waste your resources on this.
3yr
1
Alissa666
Alissa666Lv14

I agree maybe they are basing it off of other stories where the MC is reincarnated and knows exactly what will happen. This story is not like those one's it has DnD aspects and newer way of doing a few things. In my mind I believe the Author has done a few DnD or Pathfinder runs but how it seems more hardcore I would pick DnD. GM material here!

Listlessthomas:Maybe thats the kind of mc he is kinda of head first into situations not every mc needs to be a 1000 iq predict the future prodigy sometimes having something other than basicness is needed
3yr
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_Readian_
_Readian_Lv5

well, not everyone have 100 IQ.

3yr
Lv14

The higher the gibberish rating, the more brain cells die while reading the comments. It is therefore directly related to other readers wellbeing.

Tomi_S_3740:how is grammar related to intelligence? you would get along with the mc
3yr
1
GinJac
GinJacLv4

Just saying but normal average IQ for humans is 100 less than 90 is bad more than 110 is good

_Readian_:well, not everyone have 100 IQ.
3yr
1
A_Mayben_317
A_Mayben_317Lv15

between 90 and 99 is the ideal range for police officers. Smart enough to be capable enough to learn most duties but not smart enough to question orders or cause trouble. The ideal range for detectives is 100- 110 because you need to be smart enough to solve cases with clues but not smart enough to cause trouble and disobey or question orders. Just to establish a base line 80-89 is able to be taught basic tasks and perform at satisfactory levels on mundane and repetitive tasks.

GinJac:Just saying but normal average IQ for humans is 100 less than 90 is bad more than 110 is good
2yr
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Crwnprince
CrwnprinceLv15

I think that one of the things I like the most about the MC... He doesn't have all the answers , or knows everything. This allows for more secondary characters to shine. Creating a fully fleshed out world...

2yr
4
Ajmal786
Ajmal786Lv4

Not need to be mean to others. This is just a comment section not a grammer class

Jdnufhsbsb:I understand what you’re saying, but before you talk about how dumb the MC is, you should practice your grammar. Thank you!
2yr
3
Dretno
DretnoLv3

You sir have earned my respect for standing up for that guy.

Listlessthomas:dude was just sharing his opinion as some authors do like when the readers do this. yeah his grammar is poor but mans didnt need to be dissed about it on a web novel app (also my experience wIth app is the auto correct funtion kinda bugs out also itS a phone keyboard not an actual keyboard people tend to fat finger things)
2yr
5
imjustthtguy
imjustthtguyLv4

Soooooo if the Mc a guy who makes mistakes and learns or an idiot???? I can deal with mistakes as long as I feel the mc if growing

2yr
4
Dark_07_Light
Dark_07_LightLv4

romance or harem?

2yr
1
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TagDaReaper
TagDaReaperLv5

The story is getting worse as it progresses. MC was cautious and smart at the start, then he became dumber as the story progressed. He became dumbest when he got a companion fairy. Then he forgot almost all his gaming knowledge. Earlier when he thought that death was permanent, he was fine killing fellow humans. Later he found out it was only temporary, now he spares other humans. His personality also changed. Now he likes showing off and not finishing the fights quickly. I stuck so far because i liked the starting. I still think it would have been an excellent story if the author didn't purposely made it worse. To keep the story excellent all he had to do was make the MC's character consistent. Was is too much to ask for?

3yr

SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
SUBSCRIBE_MY_LISTLv5

The mc starts of strong, pragmatic and grounded. Then he gets a fairy guide and turns into a weak, scatterbrained moron. I liked the initial 25 or so chapters of the story, but with the complete 180 in personality and competence, it began to just grind on my nerves. It showed in the fights of chapter 28 and 29, then with him going from a hoarder on the avarage skyrim player level in chapter to some moron at chapter 30 who doesn't want to pick up loot because he doesn't use those items... When he's carrying a back full of junk items to sell... And needing his fairy guide to point out the obvious in a ridiculing manner, I dropped It. The way I see it, it's like two people worked on this story, the first 25 chapters or so were by a person who liked to write a competent story but lost interest. And the second by a person who had a total thing for the usual incompetant characters who need minders to tell their left hand from their right, along with tropes and clichés. Its like seeing a high rated Litrpg novel start, only to have some weebo wanting it into some kind of mix wuxia / harem anime hybrid. Perhaps the story was written by copy pasting events from other novels, then having the patchwork rewritten as one thing to make it a whole, without keeping the character and his personality in mind. That's not a bad way to write a new story, after all originality these days is just well stolen concepts applied in uncommon ways, but the loss of sight of the character's original engaging personality causing it to be exchanged for a moron with an overbearing fairy who needs to hold his hand lest he trips over his own feet is not cool. I think I would be much more interested in the story if the MC was more consistent in his character.

3yr
Kenrio
KenrioLv11

changed my mind about this novel. the mc is not only a complete moron but is a bitch to a guy he know for only a day. the guy is the typical hero complex weakling and the mc is the one that have to wipe his ass from the troubles he can resolve. it's really frustrating to read and destroyed all my good feeling of the novel until he become friend w/o the someone even more dumb than him and much more weaker .

4yr
TrippleWix
TrippleWixLv15

Start is good, rest is not, dont waste your time with this one and shovel some more MC gets only more and more stupid, and overall just a big disappointment

3yr
vamsip001
vamsip001Lv13

yes Mc played sevaral vr rpg and thinks about all the possibilities and chances to improve his fighting ability but and starts good upto 27 chaptets and get fairy guide and stops thinking even simplest things and it turns worse he got boost to fight an enemy but forget he had good skill that increases his attack powet and panics when boost was about end and was repairminded by fairy it was very boring to read to begin with but it gets even worse

3yr
Althen
AlthenLv5

Here we go. I’m at around chapter 85. Loved how it started, author covered the basics, why the MC knows this and that,etc. I love the gaming elements novels, and the mystery with the character that dies with a couple of great items but not breaking balance completely is done well. Now unfortunately it gets worse. The MC is introduced as a veteran gamer of various VR games, with at least some training in martial arts. Then as the game keeps goings he forgets more and more of this gaming knowledge (note, im ok with him not being an expert or godly reflexes,etc, but not evolving as fast as you can inspect, making noob mistakes and forgetting basic gaming elements… I hate when you dumb an MC). We add to that a helper, a guide in the form of a fairy. I like that, even when she does not tell you everything, but only if the reason is because she can’t (rules). Defenetly not because of her ego, snappy remarks, rudeness, sense of superiority, etc. And the MC reactions being to act timidly and senseless. I also did not like him keeping a guy who gets into trouble to hide under you after throwing the rock. Really? That’s the companion he wants to stick with? Finally, I am going after starting a quest where he knows he is being manipulated, knows a solution (kill him or blackmail him back, or at least tell the truth about the quest) and still does nothing. Once this issues are solved the novel can be quite good. Good idea, good background, good writing and stable updates. But the before mentioned just makes it more unbereable the more you read. Keep it up author, it’s good work, but try to improve on the mentioned.

3yr
Wuxia_1
Wuxia_1Lv1

The character got so bad I just couldn't keep reading, especially since that fairy came he just became so dumb. Why did he become such a wimp?

3yr
khirigaya_kazuto
khirigaya_kazutoLv4

The mc starts of strong, pragmatic and grounded. Then he gets a fairy guide and turns into a weak, scatterbrained moron.//////////////////////////////////////////

3yr
Rakib_Hasan_0001
Rakib_Hasan_0001Lv4

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