Blue_Bird_0758

seriously, by doing this you are giving away the most important thing that makes your novel unique. system giving info makes it to easy for mc. the whole point of struggling and making one a real chess player is gona right From here. if YOU want to write easy pessy win for mc. then i get it. its not my type of novel 😌

I would really be glad if you could tell me the name of the novel . because I can't find it in the MTL 🙂

I would give this novel 1 star . that's how bad it is. an stupid MC who is adults but don't act like one . act like 10 year old kid such a stupid thing that make me so angry that I want to say hey author don't you dare to write a Spiderman story anymore with a mature and smart MC when you don't know who how to make MC really smart .

I would have given it 4 star. but MC is forgiven person . so it's not for me. I like the MC who will pay back a teeth for teeth .

to slow . don't read if you are having a bad day . it will surely make your mental peace lose , you know what I mean . to little chapter . I don't recommend you to read this unless you enjoy MC who goes to suffering every moment of his life without a happy moments and dump MC .

I must say it's a hidden gem . I would have given the author five star . but I am very disappointed in his chapter uploading speed . so it's 4 star 🐸. author I really liked your this fan fic . so don't drop it .

dude seriously I like this fanfic of yours. but your chapter uploading is very slow. upload 3 chapter by week or 4 if possible. your already losing many readers . seriously if you have done kept stable chapter uploading then you will earn more vote man . and more readers ♥️

Author we all can agree on one thing. 😌. we want more 😏 more more

i agree bro 😇

well the plot is very confusing. one second ago he act like adult then next Chapter he acts like kid. very confusing. thats why i drop it. cant figure out how mc lose his adult mind and be a 5 year old kid