VoraciousReader2

author you have amazing skill in writing books and this one is honestly great. The characters are well designed, the story line is intriguing and the world building is also fantastic. Everything may it be politics, wars, infighting, love, friendship, humour it all feels adequate. Honestly if you make the story flow a bit more continuously (like removing the information for public disclosure) and making the story flow in a more linear way instead of abrupt change of povs, this book will be comparable if not better than actual published books. what I was trying to say was wn doesn't promote such books and seeing such a great one here not being recognised by anyone is disappointing....

one of the best books i have ever come across. it's just great. unfortunately it's published on a wrong platform. wn honestly doesn't deserve this gem. author you will be better off publishing it on rr but ig now wn holds the copyright....

this is probably gonna be how this bk ends...

read upto 509 chs the mc charecter has some flaws in the start but it gets fixed later on just hold upto 70 chs then the story becomes more interesting and charecter stay stable ull start enjoying it once u reach the 100th chs just hold in the start

one of the best books that I have been reading on wn . the story progression is well paced and beautifully worked on there is nothing that is forced and plot armour is non existent (a major problem in a lot of bks nowadays) even while the story is progressing forwards there is a huge mystery that is embedded right in its dept which makes it more interesting all characters are unique and charecter development is quite good (exept in the start 50 chs with the mc where his character takes a total turn around but it gets fixed in a few chs it's not that big of an issue tho ) the conversation between the characters is cheeky and humorous totally fun to read and will make laught a lot there are some grammatical mistakes tho mainly in the prepositions used but it's not a problem as u can easily understand and they are far off the start is lil slow ig upto the 60 chs I think the author could have sped that part a bit that's preety much it ig tho I just whish I could time travel and binge read this book 🥺

that'll really be interesting....

the mc's charecter was pretty stable up until now but this totally chenges him and turns him into a total simp for a npc

hmm this be interesting...

every girl he meets he falls head o'er heels first it was that lotus then Naomi and now this🤦🏻‍♂️🤦🏻‍♂️

try world domination system one of the best also it's completed