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2021-05-14 16:26

The mc starts of strong, pragmatic and grounded. Then he gets a fairy guide and turns into a weak, scatterbrained moron. I liked the initial 25 or so chapters of the story, but with the complete 180 in personality and competence, it began to just grind on my nerves. It showed in the fights of chapter 28 and 29, then with him going from a hoarder on the avarage skyrim player level in chapter to some moron at chapter 30 who doesn't want to pick up loot because he doesn't use those items... When he's carrying a back full of junk items to sell... And needing his fairy guide to point out the obvious in a ridiculing manner, I dropped It. The way I see it, it's like two people worked on this story, the first 25 chapters or so were by a person who liked to write a competent story but lost interest. And the second by a person who had a total thing for the usual incompetant characters who need minders to tell their left hand from their right, along with tropes and clichés. Its like seeing a high rated Litrpg novel start, only to have some weebo wanting it into some kind of mix wuxia / harem anime hybrid. Perhaps the story was written by copy pasting events from other novels, then having the patchwork rewritten as one thing to make it a whole, without keeping the character and his personality in mind. That's not a bad way to write a new story, after all originality these days is just well stolen concepts applied in uncommon ways, but the loss of sight of the character's original engaging personality causing it to be exchanged for a moron with an overbearing fairy who needs to hold his hand lest he trips over his own feet is not cool. I think I would be much more interested in the story if the MC was more consistent in his character.

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KumenEX
KumenEXLv14

Haven’t started reading, now i really won’t start reading after reading this.

Kandielord
KandielordLv15

wouldnt say its as bad as you make it, but also that youre not wrong. id say its the player as a one track mind and doesnt want to stand out even though he does. it makes him purposely hold back and forget the items/skills he has at his disposal. the fairy could be a little less snarky and a bit more forth coming. i get shes mad shes pulled from her life and forced to be linked to him. over time shes gets a little better, however she should be more forth coming. i feel like half the time he should talk and ask her for info she either is smart about it and not helpful, or he just expects her not to be and doesnt ask. he stops hoarding things cause he learns to trust that when she does speak up shes actually really useful, a pain but useful. so he trusts her judgement on what to keep, sometimes he just keeps stuff no matter what she says. I honestly hope she warms up to him faster, i get it mischievous fairy and all, and becomes more useful besides a snarky sidekick know it all. be cool if she teaches him a secret spell or aids him with her own skills.

Dan_Rat
Dan_RatLv1

i agree with your comment man... it was far more interesting when MC was still struggling with the zombies and undead back in the "real world/illusory Earth" of the "tutorial" but.... it is unable to compete with other "typical fantasy game world" novels when MC gets transported to such a medieval world setting....

Kurdi123
Kurdi123Lv11

I read 1 chapter was about to continue reading but I guess it's unnecessary to continue since this Rewiew has that many like with means that people agree with it.

Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv14

do you have any good Novels similar to this, but with competent Mc's? I like the concept but the personality of the Mc or the grammar always scares me away. Thx in advance

SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
SUBSCRIBE_MY_LISTLv5

Only paid ones. Generally if you look for gamelit or litrpg audiobooks you will find what you're looking for. I say audiobooks because pretty much only the good stuff gets turned into an audiobook as well. Sadly, those books aren't offered on wn, and can be bought on audible or if you got a vpn to hide behind acquired with some searching on audiobookbay.

Jasonenrick:do you have any good Novels similar to this, but with competent Mc's? I like the concept but the personality of the Mc or the grammar always scares me away. Thx in advance
Hobo_Hank
Hobo_HankLv14

A similar book is Mages are too OP. One of my favorite novels. The MC is intelligent and the story progresses well. If you just want an enjoyable book to read you could go with astral pet store, monarch of time, or my 3 beautiful vampire wives. All good choices that continue to perform every chapter.

Jasonenrick:do you have any good Novels similar to this, but with competent Mc's? I like the concept but the personality of the Mc or the grammar always scares me away. Thx in advance
HumbleDaoist
HumbleDaoistLv4

Fantasy Simulator is great. The translations become bad around 380-400, after that it becomes better again, likely because this novel switched translators between. So besides those 20 or so weirdly translated chapters, the novel is worth it

Jasonenrick:do you have any good Novels similar to this, but with competent Mc's? I like the concept but the personality of the Mc or the grammar always scares me away. Thx in advance
Mashiva
MashivaLv13

Well, I was about to start reading this until I saw your review. I think I'll take your word for it and not bother waste my time on this novel.

itssooyaaa_
itssooyaaa_Lv14

"Ascension of the Immortal Asura" hidden gem 💎 no harem no romance.

Jasonenrick:do you have any good Novels similar to this, but with competent Mc's? I like the concept but the personality of the Mc or the grammar always scares me away. Thx in advance
izusky
izuskyLv5

wanted to screenshot the last few paragraphs and found out that I couldn't...sucks

Asura_Fateseeker
Asura_FateseekerLv13

Yeah and even with such a stat that is double of others he still needs to fight a tough battle just to win over rookies

Ethereal_Vexage
Ethereal_VexageLv11

Thank you for the warning I'm not fond of reading stories filled with anime references or with similar behavior to that japanese media

Razor_Sharp_
Razor_Sharp_Lv15

You’re missing out on a really good story my dude.

Ethereal_Vexage:Thank you for the warning I'm not fond of reading stories filled with anime references or with similar behavior to that japanese media
Nicholas_Emmett
Nicholas_EmmettLv1

i was able to

izusky:wanted to screenshot the last few paragraphs and found out that I couldn't...sucks
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AlthenLv5

Here we go. I’m at around chapter 85. Loved how it started, author covered the basics, why the MC knows this and that,etc. I love the gaming elements novels, and the mystery with the character that dies with a couple of great items but not breaking balance completely is done well. Now unfortunately it gets worse. The MC is introduced as a veteran gamer of various VR games, with at least some training in martial arts. Then as the game keeps goings he forgets more and more of this gaming knowledge (note, im ok with him not being an expert or godly reflexes,etc, but not evolving as fast as you can inspect, making noob mistakes and forgetting basic gaming elements… I hate when you dumb an MC). We add to that a helper, a guide in the form of a fairy. I like that, even when she does not tell you everything, but only if the reason is because she can’t (rules). Defenetly not because of her ego, snappy remarks, rudeness, sense of superiority, etc. And the MC reactions being to act timidly and senseless. I also did not like him keeping a guy who gets into trouble to hide under you after throwing the rock. Really? That’s the companion he wants to stick with? Finally, I am going after starting a quest where he knows he is being manipulated, knows a solution (kill him or blackmail him back, or at least tell the truth about the quest) and still does nothing. Once this issues are solved the novel can be quite good. Good idea, good background, good writing and stable updates. But the before mentioned just makes it more unbereable the more you read. Keep it up author, it’s good work, but try to improve on the mentioned.

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