World building- five star because it’s a fan fic. Character design- is unique as he is actual going out of his way to be evil, except for the last few chapter where he helping bicky. AI chip should not have intelligence, I feel as though the author put it there so he could sound out ideas and thought between the AI chip and leylin. Story development- it follows the same thing as the original except he obtains a buff from the serpent in the lab he finds the Spector in. Update schedule- is trash it was dropped for five months without any notice. Writing quality- its alright it not mtl material but it isn’t the greatest at least it doesn’t have as many exclamation point.
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