Within the first chapter, I already liked the story much better than the original. Giving the AI an actual personality and name makes the interactions between them interesting and fun, especially when they scheme together, and gives us, the readers an emotional attachment to her. The revamped AI vs the original is like comparing an EV to a toaster, just that much better. I really like the new Leylins personality, he is arrogant, but doesn't suffer the curse of typical CN characters and spouting about 'courting death'. He knows he is weak and is making plans to get stronger. If you have read the original, you will inevitably know what happens, but I think this is much better overall. Can't wait for more chapters

I like it, dont drop this. ...................................................................................................................

keep it up author I had read the original vut didnt finish it, Thanks for your efforts.........................................................................................................................................................................................................

Keep up the good work. I like this leylin much better [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Author are you going to dig deep in the power of the laws cause in the original we didn't get to see the full extent of the powers of sin so are going to make changes so that we get to see leylin and the magus alliance use their laws to their full potential?

I haven't started reading it yet but it doesn't stop me from rating it 5 stars. the synopsis is the answer to my prayer. no romance with a.i./system and will not have its own physical body. i feel like kira when he cummed to mona lisa's hand

AUTHOOOOOOR WAKEEEE UPPP!!! ITS BEEN 19DAYSSSSSSSS WHERE R YAAAAAAA!?[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

this is better then the other Warlock of the Magus World fanfiction i have seen the mc is much more evil unlike the original mc the only problem is that auther of the novel is not updateing the chapter regularly and all in all the story is good keep it up auther and don't drooped it plz[img=faceslap]

World building- five star because it’s a fan fic. Character design- is unique as he is actual going out of his way to be evil, except for the last few chapter where he helping bicky. AI chip should not have intelligence, I feel as though the author put it there so he could sound out ideas and thought between the AI chip and leylin. Story development- it follows the same thing as the original except he obtains a buff from the serpent in the lab he finds the Spector in. Update schedule- is trash it was dropped for five months without any notice. Writing quality- its alright it not mtl material but it isn’t the greatest at least it doesn’t have as many exclamation point.