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Kaisen1
Kaisen1Lv42yr
2022-03-11 22:32

I haven't started reading it yet but it doesn't stop me from rating it 5 stars. the synopsis is the answer to my prayer. no romance with a.i./system and will not have its own physical body. i feel like kira when he cummed to mona lisa's hand

Warlock of the Magus World – Redux

TunaSandwichAddict
4.8
135 Chs

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VenerableDemon
VenerableDemonLv4

bro is there any plot deviations, i understand that this leylins character is going to even darker but other than that any difference or is this just gonna have the same plot and same ending. i kinda dropped womw somewhere chapter 600 or something so how different is this compared to the original

2yr
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bigbeeboyhere
bigbeeboyhereLv3

he is more sadistic and makes slightly different choices(usualy more evil), but the general power level and story arcs stay mostly the same

VenerableDemon:bro is there any plot deviations, i understand that this leylins character is going to even darker but other than that any difference or is this just gonna have the same plot and same ending. i kinda dropped womw somewhere chapter 600 or something so how different is this compared to the original
2yr
bigbeeboyhere
bigbeeboyhereLv3

he also tends to conceal his power less for the enjoyment of seeing his opponents morale crumble

bigbeeboyhere:he is more sadistic and makes slightly different choices(usualy more evil), but the general power level and story arcs stay mostly the same
2yr
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Rival789
Rival789Lv14

Within the first chapter, I already liked the story much better than the original. Giving the AI an actual personality and name makes the interactions between them interesting and fun, especially when they scheme together, and gives us, the readers an emotional attachment to her. The revamped AI vs the original is like comparing an EV to a toaster, just that much better. I really like the new Leylins personality, he is arrogant, but doesn't suffer the curse of typical CN characters and spouting about 'courting death'. He knows he is weak and is making plans to get stronger. If you have read the original, you will inevitably know what happens, but I think this is much better overall. Can't wait for more chapters

1yr

SadFrostie
SadFrostieLv4

I like it, dont drop this. ...................................................................................................................

3yr
Sculp
SculpLv12

keep it up author I had read the original vut didnt finish it, Thanks for your efforts.........................................................................................................................................................................................................

4yr
Sloth_King21
Sloth_King21Lv4

Keep up the good work. I like this leylin much better [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

4yr
KillingmeSoftly
KillingmeSoftlyLv3

Author are you going to dig deep in the power of the laws cause in the original we didn't get to see the full extent of the powers of sin so are going to make changes so that we get to see leylin and the magus alliance use their laws to their full potential?

3yr
Monarch_Of_Hell
Monarch_Of_HellLv4

AUTHOOOOOOR WAKEEEE UPPP!!! ITS BEEN 19DAYSSSSSSSS WHERE R YAAAAAAA!?[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

3yr
Panda343
Panda343Lv2

this is better then the other Warlock of the Magus World fanfiction i have seen the mc is much more evil unlike the original mc the only problem is that auther of the novel is not updateing the chapter regularly and all in all the story is good keep it up auther and don't drooped it plz[img=faceslap]

11mth
_JuneDays_oz
_JuneDays_ozLv14

World building- five star because it’s a fan fic. Character design- is unique as he is actual going out of his way to be evil, except for the last few chapter where he helping bicky. AI chip should not have intelligence, I feel as though the author put it there so he could sound out ideas and thought between the AI chip and leylin. Story development- it follows the same thing as the original except he obtains a buff from the serpent in the lab he finds the Spector in. Update schedule- is trash it was dropped for five months without any notice. Writing quality- its alright it not mtl material but it isn’t the greatest at least it doesn’t have as many exclamation point.

2yr
ShadowlessMoon
ShadowlessMoonLv4

Solid 5 stars story.It's a gem hiding in dirt.Read it and see if it suits your style, you'l probably like it though if you are bored of the super op mc's in different fanfics. First five or six chapters shouldn't take more than five minutes to read so you can give it a try.Also again the Author's mind is the best.Love ya Author<3<3<3

2yr
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