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2021-05-14 12:59

Author are you going to dig deep in the power of the laws cause in the original we didn't get to see the full extent of the powers of sin so are going to make changes so that we get to see leylin and the magus alliance use their laws to their full potential?

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TunaSandwichAddictAuthor

Remember I wont change major ocurrences in plot. However, I will strive to make fights and cultivation more interesting, and be sure that Ill make Leylin abuse his power ONLY whe it is safe for him to do so.

TheComedy_MaskLv3

will take keep the romance in it or his marriage

TunaSandwichAddict:Remember I wont change major ocurrences in plot. However, I will strive to make fights and cultivation more interesting, and be sure that Ill make Leylin abuse his power ONLY whe it is safe for him to do so.
TunaSandwichAddictAuthor

romance no, marriage yes

TheComedy_Mask:will take keep the romance in it or his marriage
TheComedy_MaskLv3

so he's still gonna have his children i supopose

TunaSandwichAddict:romance no, marriage yes
TheComedy_MaskLv3

well i just hope that he would get rid of those women after there use is over and doesn't bring every women he finds like when he brought back those three women from the shadow world one of them had oure blood the other two were just useless i think it's useless and stulpidto even let them live as well as that snake dowager i mean he was an ant to her but he defeated doesn't that mean she has fair chance kf getting revenge in the future even more then him when tricked her

TunaSandwichAddict:romance no, marriage yes
TunaSandwichAddictAuthor

Don't worry, I share your grievances toward the original in that regard. I plan to solve those issues, once we eventually reach that part of the story.

TheComedy_Mask:well i just hope that he would get rid of those women after there use is over and doesn't bring every women he finds like when he brought back those three women from the shadow world one of them had oure blood the other two were just useless i think it's useless and stulpidto even let them live as well as that snake dowager i mean he was an ant to her but he defeated doesn't that mean she has fair chance kf getting revenge in the future even more then him when tricked her
TheComedy_MaskLv3

thanks lot men your the goat to be honest I planning on rewriting birth of the demonic sword in summer if no does it and am planning on making him truly evil and not an idiot who will do what girl tell's him just because she keeps yelling and following him i would've killed her let alone help or give her an inheritance so if do write it i will make make deal with royals to get bunch darkness spells rather then giving it to jane

TunaSandwichAddict:Don't worry, I share your grievances toward the original in that regard. I plan to solve those issues, once we eventually reach that part of the story.
Skull_of_LifeLv3

Do you still have such plans?

TheComedy_Mask:thanks lot men your the goat to be honest I planning on rewriting birth of the demonic sword in summer if no does it and am planning on making him truly evil and not an idiot who will do what girl tell's him just because she keeps yelling and following him i would've killed her let alone help or give her an inheritance so if do write it i will make make deal with royals to get bunch darkness spells rather then giving it to jane
TheComedy_MaskLv3

i do but i am trying to write an original one before i am making the plot characters and stories and so on right but I'll make it after i make my first novel i can give you some novel recommendations if you want i have over 60

Skull_of_Life:Do you still have such plans?
Skull_of_LifeLv3

Come on. Warning: I don't like fake villains, I hate systems, but there are exceptions.

TheComedy_Mask:i do but i am trying to write an original one before i am making the plot characters and stories and so on right but I'll make it after i make my first novel i can give you some novel recommendations if you want i have over 60
TheComedy_MaskLv3

okay your'relike me , i also hate systems and fake villanins as well as annoying charachters so i am gonna give you this list _ Solitrary warrior honestly one of my favorites disaster border reincarnation paradise questioning heaven konoha hypocrite the world below the surface (haven't read this one yet ) hell app state of decay big bodhi can a scholar be called a villain lord of glory extreme eternal demon immortal demon greed all for what cursed immortality ( i am at chapter 80 and it's going good so far ) sword go in a magic world ( he doesn't start as a villain but he does become ruthless and slowly becomes a monster) note : i haven't read these ones's below yet death benefit infinite battle nigh evolution it all starts with wizard world epid of the demonic shaman the mage of eternity the world of martial arts global demon and tenebroom so some these are MTL so you have to endure some bad grammar here and there but yeah these are most of what i have enjoy

Skull_of_Life:Come on. Warning: I don't like fake villains, I hate systems, but there are exceptions.
Skull_of_LifeLv3

Thank you, the best of your list I've read, or started reading, here's my list: Way of the Cultivator The Game of A Blood Mage Evil Abyss Mage A Man's Insanity: A Changing World Douluo Dalu: Sovereign

TheComedy_Mask:okay your'relike me , i also hate systems and fake villanins as well as annoying charachters so i am gonna give you this list _ Solitrary warrior honestly one of my favorites disaster border reincarnation paradise questioning heaven konoha hypocrite the world below the surface (haven't read this one yet ) hell app state of decay big bodhi can a scholar be called a villain lord of glory extreme eternal demon immortal demon greed all for what cursed immortality ( i am at chapter 80 and it's going good so far ) sword go in a magic world ( he doesn't start as a villain but he does become ruthless and slowly becomes a monster) note : i haven't read these ones's below yet death benefit infinite battle nigh evolution it all starts with wizard world epid of the demonic shaman the mage of eternity the world of martial arts global demon and tenebroom so some these are MTL so you have to endure some bad grammar here and there but yeah these are most of what i have enjoy
TheComedy_MaskLv3

thanks a lot

Skull_of_Life:Thank you, the best of your list I've read, or started reading, here's my list: Way of the Cultivator The Game of A Blood Mage Evil Abyss Mage A Man's Insanity: A Changing World Douluo Dalu: Sovereign
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