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Clerith
ClerithLv13yr
2021-08-10 22:11

This is the story of an edgy boy who died and was reincarnated into an extremely edgy boy, becoming the emperor of edgelords. If you're fine with an evil protagonist who always has a mask when interacting with people, manipulates everyone around him, and considers even those closest to him mere slaves and tools, this might be a story for you. The constant mask is annoying, but there's very little angst, so it's okay. Everything else about the story is pretty good, though. Well written, a fairly unique plot, the MC has a well thought out, enjoyable power growth, and his increasing influence is well shown in the One Piece world, he uses his metaknowledge well, and doesn't blindly follow canon. It's interesting. The MC is an evil, natural-born sociopath who doesn't open up to anyone but sleeps around a lot, which might put off a lot of people, but it's pretty rare to have an evil character who stays evil, even after he manipulates a bunch of women into falling in love with him.

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Author totally didn't force me....... That aside, the book which currently has 21 chapters is coming along well. One piece fics are quite common but ones with mc of different race is not. Joker started it with his mc as a fishmen and wall here started as a skypiean. Writing Quality- Now the writing quality is pretty decent by webnovel standards and other than minor errors, it is pretty good but can be improved. Word count of each chapter is decent with each being 1500+. Stability- I give this five stars as long as author follows schedule they set whatever it may be but wall even offers bonus chapters which is always welcome. Story Development- Story development as of now is slow paced. Mc doesn't grow op quickly and slowly amasses power. While there are timeskips,they are small ones. We slowly explore the world through mc and see him progress which is refreshing when many compared power fantasy fics here. Character Design- The protagonist, Amon is an interesting character. He is a manipulative guy who is power hungry but he is not the cold type. He acts only when something benefits him but also enjoys what he is doing. His interactions with other characters are done well and overall he is an intriguing character. Coming to the side characters, I feel this is where the story takes a hit. The characters appear fine when they interact with mc but appear kinda stiff when on their own. I feel characters can be fleshed out a bit more and since the story is slow paced, there is plenty of room for improvement. World Background- I wouldn't bother much about world background for fanfics but wall has good knowledge of the source and lore. He explains things well and has done a good job exploring the skypieans and the shandia tribe. Overall a pretty decent fic which has gotten off to a good start and has the potential to be better.

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