A good fic by an author who knows what she is doing. Mc is a new race which is a fresh idea. Things I liked: 1. Mc is not kind-hearted and naive, mc is not a cruel psycho. 2. Mc is not dumb, is cautious. 3. Setting 4. Author has good knowledge of op and explains well. Not much to say abt writing its fine and better than most fic on this site. Characters are alright and while not super fleshed out, they don't seem like bots when they interact with mc. Overall a decent one piece fic with potential.

Be warned this story although well written isn't for everyone, the few chapters i've read disturbed me greatly. I have concluded that only selfish psychopaths and people with sadistic tendencies are the only people who would truly be able to appreciate the stories. I do not know if the author is aware, but the human psych he portrays in the story is damaging to the mental health of the readers, consider yourself warned! Enjoy the dark abyss that is the human psych!

The MC is bland really emo angsty edgelord is literally the only way to describe him i mean someone risked their life for him when he was being killed and he goes onto manipulate and use all together not care about them no realy depth i mean you can see what he will do before you read it happen. Going no further I do not recommend also many of the reviews looks fake several say he isnt a phsyco emo sasuke with zero depth but he is but worse x10

Author totally didn't force me....... That aside, the book which currently has 21 chapters is coming along well. One piece fics are quite common but ones with mc of different race is not. Joker started it with his mc as a fishmen and wall here started as a skypiean. Writing Quality- Now the writing quality is pretty decent by webnovel standards and other than minor errors, it is pretty good but can be improved. Word count of each chapter is decent with each being 1500+. Stability- I give this five stars as long as author follows schedule they set whatever it may be but wall even offers bonus chapters which is always welcome. Story Development- Story development as of now is slow paced. Mc doesn't grow op quickly and slowly amasses power. While there are timeskips,they are small ones. We slowly explore the world through mc and see him progress which is refreshing when many compared power fantasy fics here. Character Design- The protagonist, Amon is an interesting character. He is a manipulative guy who is power hungry but he is not the cold type. He acts only when something benefits him but also enjoys what he is doing. His interactions with other characters are done well and overall he is an intriguing character. Coming to the side characters, I feel this is where the story takes a hit. The characters appear fine when they interact with mc but appear kinda stiff when on their own. I feel characters can be fleshed out a bit more and since the story is slow paced, there is plenty of room for improvement. World Background- I wouldn't bother much about world background for fanfics but wall has good knowledge of the source and lore. He explains things well and has done a good job exploring the skypieans and the shandia tribe. Overall a pretty decent fic which has gotten off to a good start and has the potential to be better.

Honesty, this fanfic is a nice breath of fresh air, unlike other ones that just rinse and repeat what their pears have done constantly, this one brings some new interesting aspects into the question. Also, the no harm/no romance thing is welcomed, to me anyway, a lot of fanfics don't excel in this area and its one of main downfalls of good fanfics. Ignoring the good writing quality, another good thing about this fanfic is the mc's personality, most fanfics that have a 'evil/non-hero' main character are honestly quite stupid and either make their character too evil or too soft, I feel as if the writer has found a nice balance between the 2. Overall, you should definitely read this one.

Honestly, I picked this novel many times before dropping it after a few chapters but now that I have no other descent OP fan fic left, I took this up again after all something is better than nothing. But like always, I'm still surprised that this novel has a 4.84 rating without a single power stone. That only means that either something fishy is going on with the reviews or there are a lot of people who have inner psychopath/sociopath personalities to call this a good novel n make the rating go up to 4.84

its trash just give up...…notice me senpai this story is so bad even though I enjoyed the story I mean the story was very good but give up...… notice me senpai this isn't even a one piece fanfic like where's luffy. stop talking about Naruto. but i really liked how he became a Yonko. so why did you decide to make him hokage when he was defeating goku... i mean its just bad at this point like he can already destroy the universe.. but he still got defeated by a loli.. notice me senpai...the grammar is so bad that i didint notice a mistake but it was still bad.. So like i said you should give up you trash author.

I am amazed how your mc learn techniques like he has a teacher haha like life return which can only be learn by cp member and rokushi which only marine can learn tell me author with the long history of pirates and marines fighting have you seen a pirate use any of the rokushi none right the only thing they can do is make their own version base on the six powers like koru footwork base on shave and sanji sky walk base on moon walk and for sanji and koru to learn this technique they need years of practice like sanji he pecfect his sky walk blue for 3 years the time skip now tell me why can your mc learn it like the techinque can be learn easily

Author nerfs mc too much. With all his one piece knowledge mc cant win against 40 years old weak uncles even after 8 years of hard work. So dont expect too much.