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Celestial_Kaiser
Celestial_KaiserLv42yr
2022-07-04 22:16

Honestly, I picked this novel many times before dropping it after a few chapters but now that I have no other descent OP fan fic left, I took this up again after all something is better than nothing. But like always, I'm still surprised that this novel has a 4.84 rating without a single power stone. That only means that either something fishy is going on with the reviews or there are a lot of people who have inner psychopath/sociopath personalities to call this a good novel n make the rating go up to 4.84

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Author totally didn't force me....... That aside, the book which currently has 21 chapters is coming along well. One piece fics are quite common but ones with mc of different race is not. Joker started it with his mc as a fishmen and wall here started as a skypiean. Writing Quality- Now the writing quality is pretty decent by webnovel standards and other than minor errors, it is pretty good but can be improved. Word count of each chapter is decent with each being 1500+. Stability- I give this five stars as long as author follows schedule they set whatever it may be but wall even offers bonus chapters which is always welcome. Story Development- Story development as of now is slow paced. Mc doesn't grow op quickly and slowly amasses power. While there are timeskips,they are small ones. We slowly explore the world through mc and see him progress which is refreshing when many compared power fantasy fics here. Character Design- The protagonist, Amon is an interesting character. He is a manipulative guy who is power hungry but he is not the cold type. He acts only when something benefits him but also enjoys what he is doing. His interactions with other characters are done well and overall he is an intriguing character. Coming to the side characters, I feel this is where the story takes a hit. The characters appear fine when they interact with mc but appear kinda stiff when on their own. I feel characters can be fleshed out a bit more and since the story is slow paced, there is plenty of room for improvement. World Background- I wouldn't bother much about world background for fanfics but wall has good knowledge of the source and lore. He explains things well and has done a good job exploring the skypieans and the shandia tribe. Overall a pretty decent fic which has gotten off to a good start and has the potential to be better.

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