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Nuwa_69
Nuwa_69Lv43yr
2021-07-11 11:13

Be warned this story although well written isn't for everyone, the few chapters i've read disturbed me greatly. I have concluded that only selfish psychopaths and people with sadistic tendencies are the only people who would truly be able to appreciate the stories. I do not know if the author is aware, but the human psych he portrays in the story is damaging to the mental health of the readers, consider yourself warned! Enjoy the dark abyss that is the human psych!

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Kanemo
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toasty254
toasty254Lv4

Is it weird that I want to try reading this novel mostly because of this review? :D

Primordial_Saiyan
Primordial_SaiyanLv4

Absolutely not.

toasty254:Is it weird that I want to try reading this novel mostly because of this review? :D
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Aboode
AboodeLv1

Isn’t it a bit too harsh it is most likely a dark fantasy.

Miguel_Sayjin
Miguel_SayjinLv2

thanks friend you caught my attention, now i will give it a chance and read

ProcurandOuro
ProcurandOuroLv3

Kugo_Eco
Kugo_EcoLv12

Fair, dropped for this reason too. MC is manipulating everyone. Just a psychopath on the loose.

Damn_Toga
Damn_TogaLv4

at first I didn't believe it, but then I believe your comment, this story is really disturbed me, it's not that the story is bad but just unpleasant to read

ALEX1402
ALEX1402Lv4

Yeah mc just lacked basic human empathy. I thought it was one time thing. But after reading author’s other stories, i can conclude that ‘mentally unstable’ mc is core theme of all his stories.

Damn_Toga:at first I didn't believe it, but then I believe your comment, this story is really disturbed me, it's not that the story is bad but just unpleasant to read
zahra_kianpour
zahra_kianpourLv4

Does MC join Luffy?

ALEX1402:Yeah mc just lacked basic human empathy. I thought it was one time thing. But after reading author’s other stories, i can conclude that ‘mentally unstable’ mc is core theme of all his stories.
BlackRock_Agent
BlackRock_AgentLv4

Wasn’t shure before but now im definitely reading it.

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