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DreamCrusher101
DreamCrusher101Lv54yr
2021-01-12 09:48

I am amazed how your mc learn techniques like he has a teacher haha like life return which can only be learn by cp member and rokushi which only marine can learn tell me author with the long history of pirates and marines fighting have you seen a pirate use any of the rokushi none right the only thing they can do is make their own version base on the six powers like koru footwork base on shave and sanji sky walk base on moon walk and for sanji and koru to learn this technique they need years of practice like sanji he pecfect his sky walk blue for 3 years the time skip now tell me why can your mc learn it like the techinque can be learn easily

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Master4thWall
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Haha, Soru was ACTUALLY explained how it works in anime. You have to kick the ground more than 10x in a short period to use it. And Geppo, like you said Sanji was able to replicate it, then why can't mc? Sanji named the technique Sky Walk, initiated of Moon Walk. But do Mc have to oblige with that? Mc can call his technique, that he REPLICATED anything he wants. Is there a problem with that? I don't think so. And Seimei Kikan. Here, Mc hasn't learned Seimei Kikan, but how hard do you think it is to learn? Even us NORMAL humans can control our heartbeats by breathing rhythmically. Mc is TRYING to learn its, by doing what he thinks is right. Then Tekkai, well what can I say. Just like Soru, this was also explained A LITTLE. The user tightens their muscles, they are able to reach a state of Tekkai! Is that so hard to learn TO BE ABLE TO USE IT ONLY FOR 3 SECONDS? Well, you can answer. However, Just as stated, in the end, Mc's Soru is a weaker version. His Geppo rip-off version. His Tekkai is a ultra rip-off version. Yet, if you think this is all illogical. Then... Well, thank you for the review, I guess?

Master4thWall
Master4thWallAuthor

Oh, Life return can not only be learned by CP member. In fact, Life Return(Seimei Kikan) isn't considered a Six Powers.

Daost_Motor
Daost_MotorLv1

nil you stupid. mc had what 8 years to learn it when he had canon knowledge for fûcks sake. kanji had 3 and was able to make a rip off version. dumbàssess these days can't even see what's spelled out for them

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