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TheLovingHusbandLv23yr
2021-04-12 17:02

Pretty good fanfic. came to the Chapter God Avatar, Lady Death, the absurd All-Black Sword, which gave him the power to even kill Celestials and even Thanos with just the sneezes of Lady death. he spent a lot of time studying Science and bracing himself with a super warrior serum to fight Thanos in the future but in fact he had the support of the Cosmic Beings in just a few chapters and destroyed the already pretty good storyline. The potential for the Shadow Dimension Lord's Knull to become the motivation that made MC strong was lost with only 2 chapters. Get the support of Lady Death and All-Black Swords only MC is one of the creatures with potential threats under THE ONE ABOVE ALL and the Living Tribiunal maybe. Overall the progress of the 100+ development chapters of the MC was destroyed only because of the ignorance of the breeders wanting to make Lady death on the MC side and make slaves. 😂😂😂 # ADVICE FOR AUTHOR: MORE RESEARCH BEFORE CREATING A SENSIBLE STORYLINE.

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