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Gnossienne_NLv14yr
2021-02-03 06:35

I'll ignore the obvious OP wand, uber easy to get house elves, ultra SS rare bloodlines and friendly goblins. Waking up at 3am? I think that's just dumb or simply wrong. I got bored of the focus on boring ass druella and the whole 'save the houses' Just met this girl on the train, skip scene and now she's the new BFF for no good reason. 'I just met this dude so now I'll deal with bulling and blood purist in general 'cause? I talked to him for a bit? ' Dumb. Also tom: I got a shitload of thing to do but I better spend my first day in school waking up at 3am to train this unimportant girl. TLDR> way too many cliches, OP MC turns into an idiot whenever he's around kids

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Gilgamesh_Of_UrukLv4

Mongrel, You Have This King's Thanks For Saving His Time, Here Is A Small Reward:

Hugo_AdamLv4

All the reasons above plus Lady death being a sub was what made me drop this novel.

GoddessEmpressBirdLv12

I think I just saw another of this comment from you on a different novel

Gilgamesh_Of_Uruk:Mongrel, You Have This King's Thanks For Saving His Time, Here Is A Small Reward:
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Diablo_2790Lv1

thank you for saving my time

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