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Hentai_SenchouLv64yr
2020-12-20 21:29

Hahhh... This has the worst thing that ruins half of the Harry potter fanfics for me. Before getting enrolled in hogwarts, he mastered occlumency to the point that his mental defenses were described "as hard as a castle wall." To the point of easily blocking legilimancy from dumbledore. In a week... This completely destroys the feeling of magic for me. He didn't have to learn, study or work hard. He got a book, read it and passed out exhausted every day for a week. Now he can block dumbledore... This causes magic to not feel like magic. Someone like this has no need to question himself and others. He just reads, understands and masters. Even the original Tom actually had to study and learn. Asking questions in the slug club. Cheap and shallow power trip.

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AlienWarlordAuthor

K bye

SitOnBreadLv15

What a mature way to approach constructive criticism 😂

AlienWarlord:K bye
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DarthVegitoLv10

Thanks for the heads up! This would most likely irritate me lol so for this I thank you

ShadewindLv6

can you imagine I have stayed away from this as soon as I saw no harem . lol

DarthVegito:Thanks for the heads up! This would most likely irritate me lol so for this I thank you
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