TheLovingHusband

This is probably one of the best bleach fanfictions I have ever read, the background story before the formation of gotei 13 is something that has never been picked up by any author to my knowledge and it makes me curious how the author will take the story forward.

If it wasn't for the fact that you didn't paywall this story on patreon, I would've railed you to death for making this chapter half-assed and leaving us with a cliffhanger.

It won't take long for your readers to lose interest in your writing if you keep prolonging this, occasionally try to listen to your readers' complaints and consider them.

Example: Little Promise to Promise-chan or just Promise Senior Promise to Promise-senpai

advice to translators, don't use the term "Little" anymore before character names, it's basically just a term commonly used by Chinese people that originally means "Xiao," although you can also change "Little" to "-chan" which basically has the same meaning, also please change the word Senior to Senpai, because it's better to read Promise-senpai than Senior Promise.

Thanks for the great chapter, btw are there any fate fanfics that have deep plots like this fic, or fate/ultimate antagonist, fate/magus path, and nascent kaledioscope? If there is please recommend it.

bro really give this treatment to old worm

With a Foreigner soul that is comparable to entities such as Holy Spirit and Outer Gods, his body must also be unusual, and losing his body to get a new body from the root must have both good and bad effects that go hand in hand.