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Aion27
Aion27Lv54yr
2020-11-18 13:31

I really love this novel. I have tried to find a good cultivation vrmmorpg novel before and I have never actually come across one. The main character is perfect in my opinion. He is just the right amount of naive and I love it. For me a naive main can get annoying very quickly but not Yuan. He isn’t an idiot but there are times where he just doesn’t totally understand concepts that are obvious to others especially the NPCs in the game. Which for me adds a nice touch to his character that I am enjoying and one of the biggest things I love about this story. One thing that I can hardly wait for, at the time of this review, is when his sister will enter the game and be able to play with him. It will be very interesting to see how she will react to who he is in the game. The world right now seems like a normal cultivation world in the game. I gave five stars for it just because I don’t mind that kinda thing and I am sure this author will enhance it and make it much better as they have done for their other novel. Also, while the pacing might seem a little fast I quite enjoy the speed it is going at. There are many novels that I can’t enjoy because things just seem to drag on but not in this story and I truly enjoy not having to trudge through multiple chapters that are only there to be around to pad the word count. It isn’t like that in this story and it is another one of my favorite things about it. The writing quality is pretty self explanatory in that it is well done and I haven’t been jarred out of my resding by spelling mistakes or bad grammar. I never expected there to be any problems from this author so it wasn’t truly a surprise for it to also be given five stars. At this time it is a little bit of a wait and see on the update stability but I gave five stars for it in the true hope that the author will give us consistent updates to this wonderful story. In conclusion thanks foe an amazing story and I hope more people read it.

Cultivation Online

MyLittleBrother
4.8
1803 Chs

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Shinobu
ShinobuLv15

good review

3yr
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kiwami803
kiwami803Lv15

Can he cultivate in the real world?

3yr
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Lozz
LozzLv4

yep, bbut you gotta read further in to find out.

kiwami803:Can he cultivate in the real world?
3yr
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kiwami803
kiwami803Lv15

Thanks! Gonna read now :)

Lozz:yep, bbut you gotta read further in to find out.
3yr
3
John_Gonk
John_GonkLv13

Good Review👍

3yr
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Lord_Grim_3250
Lord_Grim_3250Lv1

i totally agree with you

3yr
Aion27
Aion27Lv5

There isn’t going to be a mass release though, as far as I know. I am not certain where you got the idea that the author will. Also, we are actually quite lucky to have two or more new chapters a day I have seen many stories that only release a chapter every few days to once a week. So don’t be upset about something that the author is actually doing amazing on.

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3yr
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qing_yan
qing_yanLv1

Good Review👍

3yr
LaughingThunder
LaughingThunderLv2

The bleeding effect Is probably my favorite thing in VRMMO type novels good to hear that before reading.

Lozz:yep, bbut you gotta read further in to find out.
3yr
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renard_ken_hapil
renard_ken_hapilLv11

same

3yr
KunPengx
KunPengxLv5

not really enjoying the Sister adventures in the story, it kind of feels like it is a filler and the mc isn't progressing.

3yr
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Aion27
Aion27Lv5

So I tried it once a long time ago but I stopped reading it. I know it was because I wasn’t enjoying it but it was long enough ago that I don’t remember why I didn’t enjoy it. Thanks for the suggestion though and since I don’t remember why I didn’t enjoy it I might give it another shot.

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Jasper_Festiva
Jasper_FestivaLv1

What do you mean when you say he is the 'right' amount of naive? He is Naive about everything and it is extremely annoying trying to follow along when the MC looks like an Idiot in situations.

3yr
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Aion27
Aion27Lv5

For me personally he doesn’t seem to be an idiot so much as he doesn’t have so much worldly experience. He isn’t stupid by any means he is actually very smart he just doesn’t understand a lot of things that makes sense to others. As you read the story you start to learn why he is the way is and why he doesn’t get some things that you start to learn and accept as you grow older. I will at least give you some idea on what I am talking about. Because he has been trapped in his body for so long and hasn’t really had much interaction with other people in a while he doesn’t understand the idea of hating others for no reason. He doesn’t really have prejudice against anyone in general. It just doesn’t make sense in his mind to totally hate someone for having something he doesn’t have like it does in the cultivation world. He is just willing to accept that others will have things he doesn’t and move on from there. While it doesn’t make him naive but he is also a good caring person overall. Like in the first part of the book he was just willing to play with a girl that is lonely on his first time of being able to use a body for a long time. Can you tell me that you would be willing to do that if you were in his situation? I know I probably wouldn’t outside of the idea of jumping around and running around everywhere then maybe she will think I was playing but not deliberately. I have gone away from the main point of what you asked though. While I say the right amount of naive, it is hard to put into words exactly what I mean by that because it is a feeling of when I read the story than having it exactly writen out. For me he isn’t so naive that it seems ridiculous and that it annoys me. So that is more of what I mean by what I said in my review.

Jasper_Festiva:What do you mean when you say he is the 'right' amount of naive? He is Naive about everything and it is extremely annoying trying to follow along when the MC looks like an Idiot in situations.
3yr
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MechianRed
MechianRedLv14

Just wanted to let you know this review is why im Going to try to read it. latley all I find are “i know everything” MC cultivation stories and the fact hes naive makes me want to try ReaDing this.

3yr
Aion27
Aion27Lv5

Thanks for letting me know and I am happy that you are giving this a try. He does get better as time goes by but he still doesn’t understand why people do things or why something shouldn’t be done sometimes. He stays as the same good person that he is at the start and doesn’t just become a murder hobo like the rest of cultivation protagonist.

MechianRed:Just wanted to let you know this review is why im Going to try to read it. latley all I find are “i know everything” MC cultivation stories and the fact hes naive makes me want to try ReaDing this.
3yr
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JorgenThinn
JorgenThinnLv14

Honestly, you give the best reviews i have ever seen... Please continue giving there kinds of reviews as it makes other people want to read the book/novel. So, please continue giving reviews like this!

Aion27:Thanks for letting me know and I am happy that you are giving this a try. He does get better as time goes by but he still doesn’t understand why people do things or why something shouldn’t be done sometimes. He stays as the same good person that he is at the start and doesn’t just become a murder hobo like the rest of cultivation protagonist.
3yr
DaoisthllwZb
DaoisthllwZbLv2

Thanks

3yr
CockroaChan
CockroaChanLv12

Between mc and you,you are probably the stupid one.

Jasper_Festiva:What do you mean when you say he is the 'right' amount of naive? He is Naive about everything and it is extremely annoying trying to follow along when the MC looks like an Idiot in situations.
3yr
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Ley
LeyLv10

🖤🖤

3yr
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I personly love this novel i have read the orginal from the begining. When he stopped updating it I was disipointed would love him to keep updating this story as this is as good as Dual Cultivation and would love to continue reading it.

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Cepheus_7439
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I am not just giving 5 stars for the sake of it....This book has good grammar and we get 2 chapters daily, story is awesome and doesn’t have obvious plot holes.....author is doing a great job in character building and the MC’s character looks real...... Now, this novel is not the same as other cliche cultivation or game novels.... Many game novels are like- 1) I have to be the number one in the game and destroy the guild that destroyed me before... 2) WHAT I GOT A SUPER-HIDDEN,SUPER-POWERFUL,SUPER-adjective CLASS IN THE NEWBIE VILLAGE!!!! 3)Oh I got the all powerful,omega leveled, invincible tier item by killing slightly powerful monster 4)Now lets build a guild, let’s get a shop before anyone else, lets upgrade the guild before anyone else etc 5)Now lets annoy some other guild and make a enemy... However this one is very different then others as MC interacts more with NPC’s than players. He gets a powerful item’jade’ but it can’t be used at all until higher stages... He has powerful weapons but cannot use weapons higher grade than his cultivation and gets a weapon that grows with him....he doesn’t have the intention of becoming number one, build a guild to make money or other reasons....he doesn’t try to escalate small matters and is respectful to other people while standing his ground....this feels like he is transported to another world rather than playing a game..... Many cultivation novels are like- 1)I need to destroy this clan in the town because they will surely try to destroy my clan....WHAT my clan is the attacker? no way, I always have higher moral ground.... 2)Why is this little girl in front of the carriage? Let’s cripple the one inside the carriage instead of the horseman and do not scold the mother who somehow teleports after I crippled the young master for not looking after the kid..... 3)WHAT The young master’s father is clan leader and this clan has the backing of all powerful sect so I have to kill everyone....does anyone in the clan or sect have the intelligence to deal with this mess without making a bloodbath... 4)WHAT my lover has a fiance and is taken away by her clan..now I have to grow stronger to destroy the fiance’s clan but forgive the lover’s clan but I will not get the idea of peacefully breaking engagement ..... Here in this novel the guards of the young masters know who to offend and not ot offend...things don’t escalate to the point of clan annihilation .....MC doesn’t have very powerful enemies who force him to become the strongest....MC does other things than just fighting or cultivating which lets the author build a more realistic world wher ethere are not only muscle head but also intelligent people with common sense

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dear_insanity
dear_insanityLv14

ahh~ this is fantastic! now, we can move on to flying sword~ it's getting more and more interesting..but, I really hope that he can cultivate in the real life later and get rid of his crippled state..poor yuan~

4yr
Gin_Karimlan
Gin_KarimlanLv1

Reveal spoiler

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TheArcher7
TheArcher7Lv12

This MC redefines the meaning of clueless. Because he was crippled at a young age, he truly has no life experience and so his interactions are hilarious.

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WhiteDevil
WhiteDevilLv6

Love this, but I'm dreading that I will catch up too soon. Wish there were more chapter and faster release schedule.

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Slackr
SlackrLv15

Why are you even bothering to read the reviews... go read the book already!!! Yo why are you reading this review still?! Go read the book already!!

3yr
TheDareDevil
TheDareDevilLv2

This is the best and I ain't exaggerating but the amazing plot and plus the credit goes to the way of writing...plus a new genre which wont be main but a deep genre or a specific i feel refreshed as there is something new to read after reading few books but having an expecting genre again and again got tired of it...But This my BOIS!made my blood boil! Literally a dual world...I wish a god emepror be there supervising the game and to the ine who reaches the top inherits his throne as he is tired of watching and living long in shadow albeit no one knows of his existence I feel yuan be his Child or some clone type..? Maybe i feel if the story was like this but yet the story slowly reveals albeit shrouded in complete mystery

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