kiwami803

You should remove these parts, it seems too ai

Yes but that only last maybe 30 or 40 years, if lucky, then it's constant pain waiting for death I would do almost anything for a new body, even to study magic or just a slight chance to go up on the existence scale

This story is really good, it's in the group of my most excited about update group

If sirzechs grew a pair, they'd be the real rulers of the underworld

Before I almost killed someone and I didn't worry about the person but about the consequences, but growing up I was heavily abused and lost most of my emotions but now a few years from not being abused I'm getting my emotion back And although I probably wouldn't feel anything from killing someone, I wouldn't feel good for torturing someone so it'd have to be quick but who knows, I haven't been in that situation so I can't say 100% Except children, I would never hurt them if possible

+1

Hiruzen taking action : damn you danzo, I am hokage and you will kiss me wether you like it or not!!!

He needs Yuijiro hanma, this will turn orochimaru into a beast

+1 he creates his own multiversal empire, take over konoha by force, strip and beat danzo and hiruzen then kill them and use edo tensei on them and turn them into rocks to be stepped on for eternity