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balanmLv154yr
2020-11-16 16:43

Well this Novel is just unique The caracter developement so far is very good i just hope that the release will continue and not stop and be consitant very good Novel i recommend it strongly

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Jerrick_ShawaLv1

nice

Immune_SystemLv3

hmm

Rainchar_NubzLv12

Look at this

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Wondering_ReaderLv3

Lol what character development. Its just face slapping 24/7

callmePapiLv15

Is there R-18 here Just like like in dual culti

WillMissQLv13

Bro youre high. Theres zero character development. 300+ chapters in and he cant move, is still blind, and doesn’t have a single original thought throughout. He does whatever someone suggests and doest ever do what he wants.

PathOfGodLv11

Barely any character development going onto this novel, exept mc become stronger with barely any change to his mentality.

Stanley_WingsLv1

its really awesome!

YeetdaproLv3

Well yes I feel this review was just made for the sake of it.

Emorej_D_DulotLv10

when you download this story can you read all of the chapter have been realeased sir May I know before I proceed to read?

ZherenLv14

is he in any relationships yet? I can't remember. Been a while since I've read this.

Emorej_D_Dulot:when you download this story can you read all of the chapter have been realeased sir May I know before I proceed to read?
THEBADgerLv4

when does he start walking in the real world, and when is he going to stop being so naive and selfless?

DoubleCoNLv15

I also want to know this, especially when he walks and becomes normal in real life again

THEBADger:when does he start walking in the real world, and when is he going to stop being so naive and selfless?
Free_Trial_1457Lv11

I love this book so much I spent money to unlock the next chapters, I hope it becomes an anime. I feel it would be a really awesome one

Daoist2d1kt4Lv1

wasome

Eddie_VanesaLv11

I have read more than 400 chapters, and according to me, the guy is not supposed to be that stupid. it makes it look like am reading a book meant for kindergarten in some parts.

DaoistEQLv2

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Aion27Lv5

I really love this novel. I have tried to find a good cultivation vrmmorpg novel before and I have never actually come across one. The main character is perfect in my opinion. He is just the right amount of naive and I love it. For me a naive main can get annoying very quickly but not Yuan. He isn’t an idiot but there are times where he just doesn’t totally understand concepts that are obvious to others especially the NPCs in the game. Which for me adds a nice touch to his character that I am enjoying and one of the biggest things I love about this story. One thing that I can hardly wait for, at the time of this review, is when his sister will enter the game and be able to play with him. It will be very interesting to see how she will react to who he is in the game. The world right now seems like a normal cultivation world in the game. I gave five stars for it just because I don’t mind that kinda thing and I am sure this author will enhance it and make it much better as they have done for their other novel. Also, while the pacing might seem a little fast I quite enjoy the speed it is going at. There are many novels that I can’t enjoy because things just seem to drag on but not in this story and I truly enjoy not having to trudge through multiple chapters that are only there to be around to pad the word count. It isn’t like that in this story and it is another one of my favorite things about it. The writing quality is pretty self explanatory in that it is well done and I haven’t been jarred out of my resding by spelling mistakes or bad grammar. I never expected there to be any problems from this author so it wasn’t truly a surprise for it to also be given five stars. At this time it is a little bit of a wait and see on the update stability but I gave five stars for it in the true hope that the author will give us consistent updates to this wonderful story. In conclusion thanks foe an amazing story and I hope more people read it.

Cepheus_7439Lv4

I am not just giving 5 stars for the sake of it....This book has good grammar and we get 2 chapters daily, story is awesome and doesn’t have obvious plot holes.....author is doing a great job in character building and the MC’s character looks real...... Now, this novel is not the same as other cliche cultivation or game novels.... Many game novels are like- 1) I have to be the number one in the game and destroy the guild that destroyed me before... 2) WHAT I GOT A SUPER-HIDDEN,SUPER-POWERFUL,SUPER-adjective CLASS IN THE NEWBIE VILLAGE!!!! 3)Oh I got the all powerful,omega leveled, invincible tier item by killing slightly powerful monster 4)Now lets build a guild, let’s get a shop before anyone else, lets upgrade the guild before anyone else etc 5)Now lets annoy some other guild and make a enemy... However this one is very different then others as MC interacts more with NPC’s than players. He gets a powerful item’jade’ but it can’t be used at all until higher stages... He has powerful weapons but cannot use weapons higher grade than his cultivation and gets a weapon that grows with him....he doesn’t have the intention of becoming number one, build a guild to make money or other reasons....he doesn’t try to escalate small matters and is respectful to other people while standing his ground....this feels like he is transported to another world rather than playing a game..... Many cultivation novels are like- 1)I need to destroy this clan in the town because they will surely try to destroy my clan....WHAT my clan is the attacker? no way, I always have higher moral ground.... 2)Why is this little girl in front of the carriage? Let’s cripple the one inside the carriage instead of the horseman and do not scold the mother who somehow teleports after I crippled the young master for not looking after the kid..... 3)WHAT The young master’s father is clan leader and this clan has the backing of all powerful sect so I have to kill everyone....does anyone in the clan or sect have the intelligence to deal with this mess without making a bloodbath... 4)WHAT my lover has a fiance and is taken away by her clan..now I have to grow stronger to destroy the fiance’s clan but forgive the lover’s clan but I will not get the idea of peacefully breaking engagement ..... Here in this novel the guards of the young masters know who to offend and not ot offend...things don’t escalate to the point of clan annihilation .....MC doesn’t have very powerful enemies who force him to become the strongest....MC does other things than just fighting or cultivating which lets the author build a more realistic world wher ethere are not only muscle head but also intelligent people with common sense

Gin_KarimlanLv1
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