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xDaoistChaos
xDaoistChaosLv154yr
2020-11-16 23:28

I personly love this novel i have read the orginal from the begining. When he stopped updating it I was disipointed would love him to keep updating this story as this is as good as Dual Cultivation and would love to continue reading it.

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balanm
balanmLv15

It is indeed

LazyBonez
LazyBonezLv14

same

Duffy3
Duffy3Lv15

same here

Aulcalus_God
Aulcalus_GodLv13

true

Webnote
WebnoteLv5

Young_fruit_Smiley
Young_fruit_SmileyLv14

So that's why, I was thinking that I have read this somewhere. Is this a remake?

xDaoistChaos
xDaoistChaosLv15

Yeah this book was stopeed at like ch29 and he has rewrote the prevous chapter and storted adding more

Young_fruit_Smiley:So that's why, I was thinking that I have read this somewhere. Is this a remake?
ashy
ashyLv14

is it stopped in raws?

xDaoistChaos
xDaoistChaosLv15

No it is a original book and he only wrote 29 chapters. he rewrote those 29 chapter and started writing more for a contest and i am asumming he will continue if the book does well like i expect.

ashy:is it stopped in raws?
Nikhil_Chand
Nikhil_ChandLv4

is this harem?

OneAutumnTree
OneAutumnTreeLv2

hopefully not

Nikhil_Chand:is this harem?
addvbg
addvbgLv10

Quite Sastifying.

PervertedNerd
PervertedNerdLv4

But why is the best r-18 writers second novel has no r-18 in it?!

Lord_Eternity
Lord_EternityLv4

Is it harem like first one?

xDaoistChaos
xDaoistChaosLv15

No their doesnt seem to be any in the novel

Lord_Eternity:Is it harem like first one?
Lord_Eternity
Lord_EternityLv4

Thats sad because this author is one of those that make harem story intreasting.

xDaoistChaos:No their doesnt seem to be any in the novel
bankar_bankar
bankar_bankarLv14

same here

izusky
izuskyLv5

dropped ?

WiFi_Jesus
WiFi_JesusLv3

I started recently but agree and hope it continues

Doug_D
Doug_DLv15

This is not a Harem, although girls are interested in him but remain in the friend zone because he lost his body in early puberty and hence is naive and clues, as with some other aspects of life. This is seriously awesome reading tho!! 10/10!

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Aion27
Aion27Lv5

I really love this novel. I have tried to find a good cultivation vrmmorpg novel before and I have never actually come across one. The main character is perfect in my opinion. He is just the right amount of naive and I love it. For me a naive main can get annoying very quickly but not Yuan. He isn’t an idiot but there are times where he just doesn’t totally understand concepts that are obvious to others especially the NPCs in the game. Which for me adds a nice touch to his character that I am enjoying and one of the biggest things I love about this story. One thing that I can hardly wait for, at the time of this review, is when his sister will enter the game and be able to play with him. It will be very interesting to see how she will react to who he is in the game. The world right now seems like a normal cultivation world in the game. I gave five stars for it just because I don’t mind that kinda thing and I am sure this author will enhance it and make it much better as they have done for their other novel. Also, while the pacing might seem a little fast I quite enjoy the speed it is going at. There are many novels that I can’t enjoy because things just seem to drag on but not in this story and I truly enjoy not having to trudge through multiple chapters that are only there to be around to pad the word count. It isn’t like that in this story and it is another one of my favorite things about it. The writing quality is pretty self explanatory in that it is well done and I haven’t been jarred out of my resding by spelling mistakes or bad grammar. I never expected there to be any problems from this author so it wasn’t truly a surprise for it to also be given five stars. At this time it is a little bit of a wait and see on the update stability but I gave five stars for it in the true hope that the author will give us consistent updates to this wonderful story. In conclusion thanks foe an amazing story and I hope more people read it.

Cepheus_7439
Cepheus_7439Lv4

I am not just giving 5 stars for the sake of it....This book has good grammar and we get 2 chapters daily, story is awesome and doesn’t have obvious plot holes.....author is doing a great job in character building and the MC’s character looks real...... Now, this novel is not the same as other cliche cultivation or game novels.... Many game novels are like- 1) I have to be the number one in the game and destroy the guild that destroyed me before... 2) WHAT I GOT A SUPER-HIDDEN,SUPER-POWERFUL,SUPER-adjective CLASS IN THE NEWBIE VILLAGE!!!! 3)Oh I got the all powerful,omega leveled, invincible tier item by killing slightly powerful monster 4)Now lets build a guild, let’s get a shop before anyone else, lets upgrade the guild before anyone else etc 5)Now lets annoy some other guild and make a enemy... However this one is very different then others as MC interacts more with NPC’s than players. He gets a powerful item’jade’ but it can’t be used at all until higher stages... He has powerful weapons but cannot use weapons higher grade than his cultivation and gets a weapon that grows with him....he doesn’t have the intention of becoming number one, build a guild to make money or other reasons....he doesn’t try to escalate small matters and is respectful to other people while standing his ground....this feels like he is transported to another world rather than playing a game..... Many cultivation novels are like- 1)I need to destroy this clan in the town because they will surely try to destroy my clan....WHAT my clan is the attacker? no way, I always have higher moral ground.... 2)Why is this little girl in front of the carriage? Let’s cripple the one inside the carriage instead of the horseman and do not scold the mother who somehow teleports after I crippled the young master for not looking after the kid..... 3)WHAT The young master’s father is clan leader and this clan has the backing of all powerful sect so I have to kill everyone....does anyone in the clan or sect have the intelligence to deal with this mess without making a bloodbath... 4)WHAT my lover has a fiance and is taken away by her clan..now I have to grow stronger to destroy the fiance’s clan but forgive the lover’s clan but I will not get the idea of peacefully breaking engagement ..... Here in this novel the guards of the young masters know who to offend and not ot offend...things don’t escalate to the point of clan annihilation .....MC doesn’t have very powerful enemies who force him to become the strongest....MC does other things than just fighting or cultivating which lets the author build a more realistic world wher ethere are not only muscle head but also intelligent people with common sense

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