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redHussar
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2021-03-27 22:15

Before anything else, let's just say one thing - this is only a translation, you can find over 1400 chapters on mtlnovel. That being said, the version on webnovel is much better - the translator used Japanese names of villages and character names. It's still not perfect, but at least it's readable (quite often there is a rapid change between 'he' and 'I', sometimes, there are translated names that generally shouldn't be, like for example White Eyes instead of byakugan, but, as I said, it's already much better). As for the story, I've seen that some people are disappointed that the MC is not completely OP from the very beginning. Don't despair, he will be there, in a reasonable time. Some people additionally criticise too many strange plots. Honestly? They are completely wrong. This story is so good, because it doesn't blindly follow canon. Decisions of the MC have consequences in the wider world. At the same time, this Naruto world isn't really AU - the butterflies are believable.

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