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Could you tell me the name of the original? Please.

I will try, because of your humility.

I’m concerned when I see comments from the fanbase denying this, using arguments like Jiraiya, Minato Namikaze, and Might Guy. Orochimaru, who was more of a genius than Jiraiya, recognized this. Jiraiya, Hiruzen Sarutobi, and others were limited to the Kage level. Minato was blessed by his lineage with a large amount of chakra and talent for space–time jutsu. Hiruzen had mastery over all five elements, and Jiraiya had talent with natural energy. If you want to become truly strong through hard work alone in that world, the paths are either stealing a bloodline (the path of Orochimaru and Hiruko) or taijutsu. But even there, you still need a certain amount of talent. Even though Might Duy, Guy, and Rock Lee trained their entire lives, we see different peaks. Duy, with the Eight Gates, could reach Kage level and defeated the Seven Ninja Swordsmen of the Mist, but he couldn’t kill them all, which shows the limitations of his power. Lee isn’t even confirmed to have mastered the Eight Gates and never reached Kage level. Guy achieved an absurd level of power, but in the end he was defeated by the power of a bloodline. Notice that even though these three characters trained in the same style since childhood, it’s clear that Guy is more talented and benefited more from his physical lineage.

Author, I’m sorry, but this is unbelievable. You nerfed the three-tomoe Sharingan with limitations it never had instead of starting him with one tomoe and letting it evolve. This is already the third mission in a row where the mission’s level is wrong. You took a case that is considered rare in Jujutsu and turned it into a 100% occurrence rate so far — that’s not realistic. The MC’s progression is ridiculous. Kaneki from the anime had better character development. The character trains but nothing changes; he’s a coward. And if you think this is realistic, ask yourself: who is living a normal life and suddenly gets called into a war? Who turns to crime from one day to the next? Do you think those people act like this MC, whom you call the most realistic? On the contrary, this is extremely unrealistic. If he’s so afraid, why did he stop one day to play video games? People sacrifice leisure and fun for a better career, and the protagonist doesn’t sacrifice that even with his LIFE on the line. It’s so detached from reality, and even so you think this is real? A drug trafficker or a war soldier has a harder life than any Jujutsu sorcerer, because at least sorcerers can evolve their abilities. In real life, the most you can do is buy a new rifle just to die from a Glock shot in the next confrontation. Not to mention the personality changes in the characters. Miwa turned into a war general, something she was never even close to in the original work. I like long chapters, but only when they have content — not an entire paragraph that could be reduced to a single line. It’s clearly artificial intelligence. There are also errors that contradict the original work, like “an army of Grade 1 to kill a Grade 1 curse.” The protagonist had to use the Mangekyō at a moment when it wasn’t necessary for the story. If the author had written a protagonist with real development, he would probably be awakening the second tomoe at this point and gaining an advantage from that, instead of nerfing the three tomoe so much that he can’t even copy abilities. Otherwise, he would have adapted all of his teacher’s fighting styles to his own physique, and at this point the MC would have two tomoe, be at Grade 2 level, stable, seeking further evolution, and thinking about future plans — not only in terms of strength, but also about high-level Jujutsu and his Zenin clan. But no — right now he’s ridiculous, with three tomoe that seem inferior to a single tomoe using Kamui, with Grade 2 cursed energy — and that’s just the energy level, because in reality the MC is afraid of Grade 3 sorcerers like Mai and Miwa. Instead of developing the character and his companions, you unrealistically and forcefully nerf the MC.

Doesn’t he have memories of his past family? Why does he love his prostitute mother so much just because she truly loved him when he showed himself to be prodigious? Is he just stupid? She’s no different from the other Zenin that the MC talks about so much.

That said, the Ten Shadows is indeed more powerful.

Why do you forget who is holding the kunai? Speed + mass is what causes the damage. Hashirama is extremely faster than an ordinary ninja like a chunin, so even if it’s the same kunai, the difference in speed — and even impact power — is much greater. In short, it’s not about the kunai; it’s about the fact that it’s Hashirama.

This argument contradicts the work itself, and I see it in many fanfics. Can you explain to me how a ninja who withstands jutsu that destroy forests supposedly has no durability? Guy’s kicks in his base form could break trees, and even so, he wasn’t going around exploding everyone with a single kick. As for the kunai, it’s simply about the force and speed applied by the one throwing it. I expected Sukuna to learn techniques in Naruto and for cursed energy to be replaced with chakra, which is a more powerful energy, keeping the power level consistent. The idea that ninjas are pure offense is a myth that has never had any logical basis, and it ends up ruining many fanfics by breaking the power scaling. Sorry if any sentence sounds offensive; this is not my native language.

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