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Zetsway
ZetswayLv124yr
2020-11-11 03:45

At first I was kinda turned off by the gender bender, but I still tried this thinking that I can just drop it if romance starts. Sadly, I'm dropping it now... The idea is fine. An si Sakura can be done nicely, but this WORLD, is not Naruto. In Naruto Sakura has CIVILIAN parents. They are not even shown in the manga. Now, her mother can fucking intimidate the Hokage with he KI...that's all kinds of broken. If her mother was that op, cannon Sakura would be the most powerful in her generation.

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Sadarsa
SadarsaLv4

"Naruto Sakura has CIVILIAN parents" eh, you're wrong there. This story is using the alternate world from the movie "Road to Ninja". If you look on the wiki pages you'll see them listed as ninja. The Father is straight up listed as a Genin. The Mother, while listed as a Kunoichi does not display her rank, and the only hint is that at times she can be terrifying. What's more, just because YOU don't like the story is no reason to review bomb the author with the lowest score possible. You might as well walk up to him in the street and spit on him for his audacity of trying to share his FREE story with you.

Zetsway
ZetswayLv12

I gave you a bad review because you said that the action will take place in the Naruto world, or at least you implied as such. A world were Sakura's parents (or just her Mom) are more OP then Kakashi, is not a world of Naruto. If her parents were even remotely that strong there is no way they would not react with all that happened around her daughter. From the start of wave to the end of the series, Sakura was in danger, yet her parents had nothing to give her for protection, not even teach her a jutsu or some slightly more advanced taijutsu. No parent would let their child suffer that much without helping if they can. Next time you want a fair review to your story, don't say something and do another.

Sadarsa:"Naruto Sakura has CIVILIAN parents" eh, you're wrong there. This story is using the alternate world from the movie "Road to Ninja". If you look on the wiki pages you'll see them listed as ninja. The Father is straight up listed as a Genin. The Mother, while listed as a Kunoichi does not display her rank, and the only hint is that at times she can be terrifying. What's more, just because YOU don't like the story is no reason to review bomb the author with the lowest score possible. You might as well walk up to him in the street and spit on him for his audacity of trying to share his FREE story with you.
Sadarsa
SadarsaLv4

wow... seriously? you went and review bombed over such a stupid reason.... it's a fan fic... not a rewrite of the original story.

Zetsway:I gave you a bad review because you said that the action will take place in the Naruto world, or at least you implied as such. A world were Sakura's parents (or just her Mom) are more OP then Kakashi, is not a world of Naruto. If her parents were even remotely that strong there is no way they would not react with all that happened around her daughter. From the start of wave to the end of the series, Sakura was in danger, yet her parents had nothing to give her for protection, not even teach her a jutsu or some slightly more advanced taijutsu. No parent would let their child suffer that much without helping if they can. Next time you want a fair review to your story, don't say something and do another.
DragoPackMan
DragoPackManLv4

most of the fanfic actually AU so author should just put that tag

Zetsway:I gave you a bad review because you said that the action will take place in the Naruto world, or at least you implied as such. A world were Sakura's parents (or just her Mom) are more OP then Kakashi, is not a world of Naruto. If her parents were even remotely that strong there is no way they would not react with all that happened around her daughter. From the start of wave to the end of the series, Sakura was in danger, yet her parents had nothing to give her for protection, not even teach her a jutsu or some slightly more advanced taijutsu. No parent would let their child suffer that much without helping if they can. Next time you want a fair review to your story, don't say something and do another.
DragonkingKyo
DragonkingKyoLv6

to be truthful all fanfictions are AU

DragoPackMan:most of the fanfic actually AU so author should just put that tag
SlyImmortalDevil
SlyImmortalDevilLv11

The alternate universe in Naruto is stupid, I don't understand how out of all useless characters why is Sakura's father the hokage? How is it the opposite?

DriftingDragon
DriftingDragonLv13

Mind Blown🤯🤯🤯

DragonkingKyo:to be truthful all fanfictions are AU
Trollface
TrollfaceLv1

what a stupid deer you are

Sadarsa:wow... seriously? you went and review bombed over such a stupid reason.... it's a fan fic... not a rewrite of the original story.
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