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Skepparn
SkepparnLv144yr
2020-11-08 10:12

The idea of the story is good actually but the actual story is bad Mc progress is absolute shit, chapters and too short to even scroll properly and the mc doesn’t have any sense whatsoever, like who tf actually does what the mc is doing in the first 6 chapters The story is a solid 1/5 cause that’s the lowest I could give but it could’ve been a probable 2/5 or 3/5 if the first 10 or so chapters were rewritten with sakura memories and not having the mc freak out like a 5 year old and screaming her monologue like a fucking chuni autist

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WN_grdy_mthr_fker
WN_grdy_mthr_fkerLv11

lol 😂 be honest you bastard .you gave 1 star because it's Sakura fan fiction right otherwise there are dumber and more ridiculous fan fiction out there then this one ....

Skepparn
SkepparnLv14

nope, I gave a 1star review cause the mc acts like a autistic child, screeching monologues and acting like an idiot 24/7 so far

WN_grdy_mthr_fker:lol 😂 be honest you bastard .you gave 1 star because it's Sakura fan fiction right otherwise there are dumber and more ridiculous fan fiction out there then this one ....
WN_grdy_mthr_fker
WN_grdy_mthr_fkerLv11

lol I mean he is body of Sakura there are bound to be side effects 😂

Skepparn:nope, I gave a 1star review cause the mc acts like a autistic child, screeching monologues and acting like an idiot 24/7 so far
Skepparn
SkepparnLv14

well the review is of my opinion, it really doesn't matter what you think cause a review is made for me to share MY opinion not yours and I genuinely believe the mc acting like a fucking retard could make any billion dollar movie or book series a worthless piece of garbage in my eyes

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Fightas89
Fightas89Lv14

you could say just the same about most of the 5 star reviews dude. Most ppl, me too don´t check every criteria and just give an overall rating.

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