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Ashmodai
AshmodaiLv44yr
2020-11-12 23:59

This is just a patreon cashgrab. The chapters are short. like 5 sentences short. All that happened in the first 5 Chapters was "Walking out of the room and asking her mom to train her." Just with lots of crying that she is Sakura. And at the end of the chapter you have a fifth of the chapter patreon advertising.

I became Haruno Sakura?

Carl_Joe
3.8
103 Chs

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Irma_Linda_8412
Irma_Linda_8412Lv1

Doesn't like ?? Why u read?? Freak!!

4yr
Ashmodai
AshmodaiLv4

You are a spezial kind of retarded. How do you know if you like something if you don't read the story? I stopped reading after trying it and informed here others about this story. Dumbass.

Irma_Linda_8412:Doesn't like ?? Why u read?? Freak!!
4yr
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Sadarsa
SadarsaLv4

I agree that the first little bit was annoying, but the story really takes off after those rough first few chapters.... as to the patreon advertising... i didn't even see it... who reads the authors notes at the end anyway?

4yr
1
HugoImpact
HugoImpactLv3

And it's $15 for 13 advance chapters. What a rip-off.

4yr
1
JoJoMoggyJo
JoJoMoggyJoLv1

Stupid

Irma_Linda_8412:Doesn't like ?? Why u read?? Freak!!
4yr
Other Reviews
Seerer
SeererLv5

me: reads the title imagines waking up and becoming sakura........... *takes kunai stabs my throat*.................. ......................

4yr

Plot_armour
Plot_armourLv2

I feel bad for the mc. I hope she doesnt commit suicide because of depression. .

4yr
Skepparn
SkepparnLv14

The idea of the story is good actually but the actual story is bad Mc progress is absolute shit, chapters and too short to even scroll properly and the mc doesn’t have any sense whatsoever, like who tf actually does what the mc is doing in the first 6 chapters The story is a solid 1/5 cause that’s the lowest I could give but it could’ve been a probable 2/5 or 3/5 if the first 10 or so chapters were rewritten with sakura memories and not having the mc freak out like a 5 year old and screaming her monologue like a fucking chuni autist

4yr
Zetsway
ZetswayLv13

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Guest999
Guest999Lv14

Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy i hate sakura so much image making someone spend years looking for your loved one and not say thank you bro sasuke was willing to kill her but here is 5 stars

4yr
Eom
EomLv4

Fucking trash... I really hate when everyone aware of the thingsMC's does fucking chill man its not even day you made hokage watch her training and like idiot she is training in top of mountain and that fucking mother sense that little chakra wtf .she looks like omnipotent already if she can't know that in that body is not her daughter with that sense who the **** you are kidding what a trash I skip this chapter for such a garbage first training she does seen by hokage and omnipotent mother what the fick secret are there anyway... And you ****er did a chapter to just say what 3 ninjutsu is 10 chapter pass one day and with 200 word per chapter you have a fave to do patreon who the **** pay for that.

4yr
Iamsunny9
Iamsunny9Lv3

Good concept but just way too poor execution. Her mother basically became some kind of God. She can scare Hokage with just one look. Same Hokage who is called God of shinobi also led his village to victory and Sakura's Mother can somehow scare the shit out of him.

4yr
Fightas89
Fightas89Lv14

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Doge_Blade
Doge_BladeLv14

useles fanfic useless fanfic useless fanfic useless fanfic useless fanfic useless fanfic useless fanfic useless fanfic useless fanfic useless fanfic

4yr
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