Mortifer

I had high hopes for this one because the premise sounded interesting but nope, it's another AI fic. you can notice these fics through the frequent use of em-dash and en-dashes which people normally don't use. Another clue is the seemingly random titles per scene change. and the last clue is the repeating scenes but with slight differences.

The premise is nice and interesting but the dialogue and how it's written sounds stiff and awkward. reminds me of AI stories but I'm not very certain about that. The author also tends to state the obvious and it's done over and over which makes the dialogues very awkward to read. Like there's this OP potion he's got and he says it's good if he uses it right but there might be greater rewards if he donates it? like bro you literally have a charity system that gives you 25x what you give out. why is this even a question?

reminds me of sovietwomble HAHAHAHAHA

He only has cultivation feedback form xiao xun because she's his main feedback link. the others are merely specifics (qing lin for her snake thingy, Medusa and ziyan for bloodline, xiao Yan for the alchemy)

Descension. the rite of parting was done AFTER they thought Morax died.

Dialga, Palkia, and Giratina

the 5 star egg reward is disappointing af

lock him in a room and put a bun in the oven to seal the deal

Dude got peer pressured because he don't want the nazarick staff turning on him lol

it tracks even with Canon though. Plot armor just means he gets caught up in everything absurd lol