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FrostKing5678
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2020-10-08 23:18

the first 8 chapters were good but after that it became trash 馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥馃憥

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Xen_120598
Xen_120598Lv4

how?

WorldMonarch
WorldMonarchLv14

the author made the mc and his girls link their souls, there by allowing the girls to gain his 3 talents while he get absolutely nothing.

Xen_120598:how?
DragonGod999x
DragonGod999xLv4

this is like rhe fanfic I read some months ago where mc reincarnated with his gf in another world, I got hyped but when you read further the mc is way far weaker than his gf with one punch from his gf he is knocked out they both got a system, his gf got marvel and dc system while mc got cultivation and anime system and shit happened like his gf didn't even care about him the mc gave powers to his gf that made her far op than him while she didn't give anything back to him lol that chapter gave him many negative comments.

WorldMonarch:the author made the mc and his girls link their souls, there by allowing the girls to gain his 3 talents while he get absolutely nothing.
BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5

holy mother of. Yeah, not even gonna bother with this fanfic, that sounds so retarded. Not the act itself, as i like the fact that he would do anything for his girls, but the possibility that he could do some shit like that, just tells me its authors way of ejaculating.

WorldMonarch:the author made the mc and his girls link their souls, there by allowing the girls to gain his 3 talents while he get absolutely nothing.
Ser_Gamma
Ser_GammaLv13

Don't forget, he gave himself a weakness. Who knows what would happen if the girls connected to HIS soul died.

WorldMonarch:the author made the mc and his girls link their souls, there by allowing the girls to gain his 3 talents while he get absolutely nothing.
StrikingWave
StrikingWaveLv3

Poor of you

BrabbitX:holy mother of. Yeah, not even gonna bother with this fanfic, that sounds so retarded. Not the act itself, as i like the fact that he would do anything for his girls, but the possibility that he could do some shit like that, just tells me its authors way of ejaculating.
Shallow_JR
Shallow_JRLv4

Toxicity of Webnovel shitter readers.

Jhxi_Javier
Jhxi_JavierLv11

**** so unhappy was

DragonGod999x:this is like rhe fanfic I read some months ago where mc reincarnated with his gf in another world, I got hyped but when you read further the mc is way far weaker than his gf with one punch from his gf he is knocked out they both got a system, his gf got marvel and dc system while mc got cultivation and anime system and shit happened like his gf didn't even care about him the mc gave powers to his gf that made her far op than him while she didn't give anything back to him lol that chapter gave him many negative comments.
Len_Stoff
Len_StoffLv1

Author are you not tired of writing 99% rubbish only about women? The whole point of the hitman is that the plot revolves ONLY around him and not on useless women, it seriously infuriates and looks as if you are a sick psycho with an addiction to women and you don鈥檛 know anything else in life, the first chapters were still interesting, but then you just make the plot not about the reincarnation of a person and his life, but about women and their worthless life (I am writing through a translator)

ORION_4144
ORION_4144Lv14

Agreed. Mc is Mc not his women.

Len_Stoff:Author are you not tired of writing 99% rubbish only about women? The whole point of the hitman is that the plot revolves ONLY around him and not on useless women, it seriously infuriates and looks as if you are a sick psycho with an addiction to women and you don鈥檛 know anything else in life, the first chapters were still interesting, but then you just make the plot not about the reincarnation of a person and his life, but about women and their worthless life (I am writing through a translator)
HypnosGodofSleep
HypnosGodofSleepLv14

How are the first 8 chapters good? They were weird asf.

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