Tbh the sole fact that he could do something like merging fking souls in such a short time is already retarded. God literally gave him the talents he own. He shouldn't be able to share as it should be in the core of his soul not in some cornor of his soul. Tbh this whole merging thing was just unnecessary. It would have been way way better if konans individual talent was explored. In conan it was enough for her to become an s rank. If explored more it could probably make her quite op.in future mc could probably make her more powerful with his seals or something. He didn't touch senjetsu because it was dangerous but he touched his souls and merged them when he doesn't know shit about souls??? tbh I like the story so I won't drop but this soul thingy took it down to four star for me. It was too forced. He should just remove the whole soul part as it doesn't affect much rn but his choice I guess

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The first eight chapters are great and i would give a 5 stars if only I based on the first 8 chapters but after 9 is absolute trash he author go crazy after 9 ruining the history i never felt so frustrated with a author before, maybe the author of hunterxhunter too, but for the first time in my life I'm going to give someone a bad review after years on webnovel. I never liked to do it but this time he deserve it

this book is meh konan seems more like the protagonist than the mc does also the fact author doesnt want to make the mc stronger or more talented but makes konan way stronger & more talented is annoying af like the fact his harem will get all his talents(watered down) while he gets only larger chakra in return(even tho chakra is a mix of spirit & body but souls would only increase spirit) is pretty ridiculous

3.8- The plot starts in ame, and hanzo is alive, so way before cannon, like konan is a kid, about 25 or yrs before....very nice. IDK, try to develop or something, I am really praying u dont join konoha or someshit and do the usual shit. Use SI knowledge for advantage, for fiction to non fiction knowledge. Eye shit is dope but would be nice if MC uses other shit like kaguya clan shit, the new eye thing in boruto, jugo bloodlines or something. 1.2- FK UR PLOT. no offense but seriously, a plot which basically is an MC trying get all the chicks is not a story but a personal wishfullment *** fantasy type shit. not a bk. [ unless its removed ] That said, urs is better cause it has actual content, and I will just ask this. add content. build ur story, unlike the other garbage in this site with degenerate MC and sluts. Some people like reading stories Also. look...kinks are kinks, but dont have 12 yr olds having intense ***** relationships, its weird. take time and dont rush, and just build it. **: I hope u dont do the shit u did with narcissa here, also ur other bk....the entire world was revolving around MC, everyone other than MC was a retard to the point it was funny. try to avoid that and make people sensible. IDK , anyway GL, dont do the usual shit. if u do, nothing wrong just give a heads up

It’s trash dumb and just trash I read until 8th chapter and the story to me just plummeted like he gained zero to nil while she gained his everything like he is GOD how can a small world like share powers that a God made for him to be shared so easily I’m going to come back in a year to see if it’s better but for know this is on a blacklist for me!

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the story was developing pretty good from chapters 1 to 8, but at chapter 9 it all went down hill with the soul link bs, in my opinion if the author was gonna link souls he could of done something like if one persons chakra increases so does the others, or something in the line of them feeling where they are to never be separated or to feel each other's emotions , but no the author went with some bs that when the mc links his soul to a person they will gain his 3 talents the things that make him unique, while he gains absolutely nothing all because the author doesn't want to make him OP but is willing to make his girls OP. Another thing that is BS was in how the author said the MC gets nothing from the people(his harem members most likely) he links his soul with because it will take away their uniqueness but its alright for them to gain the MC talents basically the only thing that makes him unique. sorry if I when on a tangent, I really thought this story had potential but after reading that soul link BS it became extremely disappointing.

There some unnatural story with konoha shinoby but still readable. But at chapter 39 after some random guy interupted the kising the girl wanted to blow up the capital. Mc say no need to blow up and go creating hurricane that froze the whole capital to way below the 0 probably kiling a ton of ppl or cripling them. After this chapter you want normal people to sympathize with them? And he go on and on why he wanted to punish some rapist for whole chapter before this chapter... So they fine killing lets say 500000 kids, women and everyone else for disturbing their kissing. But go all righteous on me because of one rapist? What should i think of them???