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QohLv24yr
2020-10-13 17:56

It’s trash dumb and just trash I read until 8th chapter and the story to me just plummeted like he gained zero to nil while she gained his everything like he is GOD how can a small world like share powers that a God made for him to be shared so easily I’m going to come back in a year to see if it’s better but for know this is on a blacklist for me!

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KasiCairAuthor

You read up to the 8th chapter and judge it is trash? I am not even going to delete this review to make people see it... It shows something important about you :D.

CodezLLv4

but taking out the insults he is right, I distorted everything from the mc to konan and he did not get anything.

KasiCair:You read up to the 8th chapter and judge it is trash? I am not even going to delete this review to make people see it... It shows something important about you :D.
Marshal_OmigaLv1

that looks annoying to read.

KasiCairAuthor

Then don't. *shrug*

Marshal_Omiga:that looks annoying to read.
KasiCairAuthor

I wrote that both of their chakra expanded and got denser. I never once stated just HOW MUCH of his talents Konan received. I never stated she would actually be able to use them. I never stated she would be a prodigy at seals. I never stated how and if she would be able to utilize nature chakra... all I did was say her chakra control was extraordinary thanks to the talents. The thing I did was to not give the MC her bloodline through it. Because it was supposed to be rooted not only in her chakra or soul but also in her DNA, something the MC did not receive. And her bloodline was the ONLY thing the small girl could have given him. MC received Konan herself. It was not mind-control but he still had her loyalty and the soul merge made them 'inseparable' (not literally). Now my question is... did you read even one chapter or did you just repeated what was said in bad reviews? Because it is CLEARLY stated their chakra grew a lot and got denser and more compressed so saying he received nothing is like saying you got no money from winning a lottery. Now, if you read it and still don't like it... that's your opinion and I will respect it. But at least get your facts straight. As for not deleting this review... I won't do it. Honestly, I would actually be glad if the guy actually DID NOT come back and read this story. If he can get butthurt enough to drop it due to one chapter he didn't like, it would save both of us the effort if he just decided to never ever click on this story.

CodezL:but taking out the insults he is right, I distorted everything from the mc to konan and he did not get anything.
CodezLLv4

You also showed that he could understand the seals just by looking at them like him, and that his energy control was so good that he learned to hide his chakra and he can even use MOKUTON, so don't write nonsense ...

KasiCair:I wrote that both of their chakra expanded and got denser. I never once stated just HOW MUCH of his talents Konan received. I never stated she would actually be able to use them. I never stated she would be a prodigy at seals. I never stated how and if she would be able to utilize nature chakra... all I did was say her chakra control was extraordinary thanks to the talents. The thing I did was to not give the MC her bloodline through it. Because it was supposed to be rooted not only in her chakra or soul but also in her DNA, something the MC did not receive. And her bloodline was the ONLY thing the small girl could have given him. MC received Konan herself. It was not mind-control but he still had her loyalty and the soul merge made them 'inseparable' (not literally). Now my question is... did you read even one chapter or did you just repeated what was said in bad reviews? Because it is CLEARLY stated their chakra grew a lot and got denser and more compressed so saying he received nothing is like saying you got no money from winning a lottery. Now, if you read it and still don't like it... that's your opinion and I will respect it. But at least get your facts straight. As for not deleting this review... I won't do it. Honestly, I would actually be glad if the guy actually DID NOT come back and read this story. If he can get butthurt enough to drop it due to one chapter he didn't like, it would save both of us the effort if he just decided to never ever click on this story.
CodezLLv4

besides that the mc already had his own konan since before the fusion of souls, she was already a fan of him, you also wrote that the chakra and the density of the konan chakra increased as much as his, if you had not given him the individual talents from mc to konan so I wouldn't complain, but I distorted everything from mc to konan and he got NOTHING, because everything he got as more chakra and denser was something she ALSO got

KasiCair:I wrote that both of their chakra expanded and got denser. I never once stated just HOW MUCH of his talents Konan received. I never stated she would actually be able to use them. I never stated she would be a prodigy at seals. I never stated how and if she would be able to utilize nature chakra... all I did was say her chakra control was extraordinary thanks to the talents. The thing I did was to not give the MC her bloodline through it. Because it was supposed to be rooted not only in her chakra or soul but also in her DNA, something the MC did not receive. And her bloodline was the ONLY thing the small girl could have given him. MC received Konan herself. It was not mind-control but he still had her loyalty and the soul merge made them 'inseparable' (not literally). Now my question is... did you read even one chapter or did you just repeated what was said in bad reviews? Because it is CLEARLY stated their chakra grew a lot and got denser and more compressed so saying he received nothing is like saying you got no money from winning a lottery. Now, if you read it and still don't like it... that's your opinion and I will respect it. But at least get your facts straight. As for not deleting this review... I won't do it. Honestly, I would actually be glad if the guy actually DID NOT come back and read this story. If he can get butthurt enough to drop it due to one chapter he didn't like, it would save both of us the effort if he just decided to never ever click on this story.
DaoistLadyKillerLv11

* Sigh * ignore them author they're just a bunch of shits who want to cry about everything, they think they can criticize a story just because they don't like something, write good arguments at least and not this shit

Sudden_YoungLv2

It is fanny soullyter it is inba and 1 dont logical moment it is novel

A_reader_for_funLv12

But is that not what a review is for?

DaoistLadyKiller:* Sigh * ignore them author they're just a bunch of shits who want to cry about everything, they think they can criticize a story just because they don't like something, write good arguments at least and not this shit
DaoistLadyKillerLv11

Go back to school Friend

A_reader_for_fun:But is that not what a review is for?
ShadewindLv6

Lol r u new to webnovel . If you are then welcome noob.

DaoistLadyKiller:Go back to school Friend
DaoistLadyKillerLv11

you don't even understand what a review implies, stop reading on webnovel and go to school boy

Shadewind:Lol r u new to webnovel . If you are then welcome noob.
ShadewindLv6

Wow you are also a mentally retard as you can't even understand my comment .

DaoistLadyKiller:you don't even understand what a review implies, stop reading on webnovel and go to school boy
DaoistLadyKillerLv11

what I see is like trying to escape the truth that you don't even have school level knowledge by making coherent arguments about something that happens on the internet

Shadewind:Wow you are also a mentally retard as you can't even understand my comment .
ShadewindLv6

R u a idiot . I perfectly understand what reviews mean . But in this site review works completely different from what it supposed to be . So i ask you r u new to webnovel and from you response you are . And why i ask you that question even through your level is 2 cause i thought maybe this is your new account . So you tell me who is lacking school knowledge . Maybe its my fault expecting you to understand normal sentence but who would know you can't understand such simple things. So yeah its really my lack of knowledge for not knowing people like you exist.

DaoistLadyKiller:what I see is like trying to escape the truth that you don't even have school level knowledge by making coherent arguments about something that happens on the internet
A_reader_for_funLv12

I still am in school? High school in fact.

DaoistLadyKiller:Go back to school Friend
TOFIELv3

It shows how people don't like your story for a reason. Why do you think a lot of people in the reviews are complaining about this. If you are not able to deliver the story early. That's your fault. It's called a bad advertisement.

KasiCair:You read up to the 8th chapter and judge it is trash? I am not even going to delete this review to make people see it... It shows something important about you :D.
sennnnnnnnLv4

TOFIE:It shows how people don't like your story for a reason. Why do you think a lot of people in the reviews are complaining about this. If you are not able to deliver the story early. That's your fault. It's called a bad advertisement.
QohLv2

Shut up your annoying prob sucked up to girls your whole life if u want konan to be the mc than just do it, it’s funny to see an mc get just fodderized by an girl who took all his talents she has more than him he didn’t get an ounce of an power up now she has his talent multiply it by hers now boys we got ourselves Kaguya number 2 smh....

KasiCair:I wrote that both of their chakra expanded and got denser. I never once stated just HOW MUCH of his talents Konan received. I never stated she would actually be able to use them. I never stated she would be a prodigy at seals. I never stated how and if she would be able to utilize nature chakra... all I did was say her chakra control was extraordinary thanks to the talents. The thing I did was to not give the MC her bloodline through it. Because it was supposed to be rooted not only in her chakra or soul but also in her DNA, something the MC did not receive. And her bloodline was the ONLY thing the small girl could have given him. MC received Konan herself. It was not mind-control but he still had her loyalty and the soul merge made them 'inseparable' (not literally). Now my question is... did you read even one chapter or did you just repeated what was said in bad reviews? Because it is CLEARLY stated their chakra grew a lot and got denser and more compressed so saying he received nothing is like saying you got no money from winning a lottery. Now, if you read it and still don't like it... that's your opinion and I will respect it. But at least get your facts straight. As for not deleting this review... I won't do it. Honestly, I would actually be glad if the guy actually DID NOT come back and read this story. If he can get butthurt enough to drop it due to one chapter he didn't like, it would save both of us the effort if he just decided to never ever click on this story.
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